You cant stop not nice-lexie

Great story! I loved it, plese keep on writing! Hurry with the next chapter!

Nice little make out session they had goin' there... Why'd they stop? hehe, This wasa good chapter. Not much happened, but it wan't bad by any means.

Lavender,

Yay, I get a hug! lol Well, it's not as good as getting purple toe shoes, but it'll do lolz. I loved this chapter, as always. It was a teary one, wasn't it? Um...how'd you get that box-y thing around the words, that was odd. I'm confuzzled! Help me! lolz. I really dont' get it...was the box *supposed* to be there? In any case...moving on to the CHAPTER.

First off...Lily & Nick. That was so sweet! I liked that Lils told Nick about being a witch. I'm not sure if it was a GREAT decision, but I liked it all the same. Very cute. And how she promised they'd be friends, and cried on him...and it ended perfectly. I started to crack up at the end when you ended that scene with Lily kicking him outta her room so she could sleep.

Secondly, Sirius & his father. Wow. Can you say 'heart jerker?' Because that's what it was. Absolutely perfect. I loved EVERYTHING about it, it was ever-so-sweet, and everything. I mean it, I loved how Sirius was upset about his father, and then kinda made up with him, and he's now happy cuz he's gonna get a sister/brother! AW! lol. I'm such a sop. But anyways, awesome job. Sorry this review isn't as descriptive/long as usual, but I wanna get to the new chapter quickly. Awesome job, girl!

Love ya, Britz

HEY LAVENDER!

I reviewed ch. 5 yesterday, but then I had to babysit. Twins. Twin boys. 3 year old twin boys. *shudders* I was scared. Not that I haven't watched them before, because I have, but I put them to bed for the first time yesterday...be very, very afraid, right? lolz. Anyway, sorry I didn't get to this sooner.

YOU HAVE PURPLE POINTE SHOES? You suck! I want your purple pointe shoes! Not fair! Mine are freakin PINK and I *LOATHE* pink! ew! not fair! I'M SUEING (or is it suing or...?) TO GET YOUR TOE SHOES! *deep breath* Okay! *smiles happily*

Poor Lily! I felt sooo incredibly bad for her! But first...that whole thing with James & Lily on the beach shows that their relationship will last, and James (although practically yelling at her) was able to express himself, and I loved that you had him cry. It's so cute when the guys cry. lol. But seriously, I loved that so much.

Yet another Jess scene. I love those...am I the only one who says that to you? In any case, I find them intersting...you know, the person INSIDE the demoness...lol j/k of course. She showed Lily mercy at the end of the chapter, you have to give her SOME credit, right? Anyway, she was written beautifully, as usual.

And finally...dinner. Mr. Potter. Well, he's definitely not the nicest person, now is he? That was rheutorical, btw. Oh, and was he drunk during that? To make him worse than usual? Or was that his cheery self? In anycase, poor James. I mean, poor Lily, of course, but James-he's in love with his girlfriend who is being verbally abused by his father...not a great situation, now is it? I have one question..."I hope everything works out, James. I just don't see how it can right now." Was that a break-up line, or was she referring to the situation with him & his father?

OMG, I'm so honored...you mentioned me even though I was away and couldn't review? You're so sweet! I'd LOVE to go on a trip with Siri to Brazil. Unfortunately, I just went to Cape Cod. Which sucked. Of course, I hate it there, so that kinda figures. There's nothing to do, it's FREEZING, it rained half the time, and I was stuck with little people...*sigh* Isn't my life hard? Lol. Anyway, awesome chapter!

Luv ya, Britz

Congrats James and Lily! If I lived in their world, and their time, I'd send them a letter, too. : P All of that snogging was sweet. : p I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner!

OOOOO! Where do I get my map? I want a Marauders map!

Anyway, great chapter! I was like,what the heck, until they got their badges and letters cause I remember Hagrid saying that they were Head Boy/Girl.

Update soon! Or I will resort to annoyying e-mails demanding new chapters!

THe Minnesotan in England

marzoog

Thanks for responding to my review! I love it when authors do that and so few of them do!

yay! a new chappie! im so excited. they're back together! hurry up and get out the next chapter

This is SSSOOOOO Wicked! u have 2 email me when u update. Please?

U r going on my Favorite Authors list and this story is going on my Favorite Stories list!

Love the sroty!

~**~**~*~*Artistic Muse*~*~**~**~

ooo0000oooo! JEWELRY! **jumps up and down excitedly** YAY! A girl can never have to much jewlery! I always wanted a Marauders map!

This chapter wasn't that bad. I think that every story needs a chapter like this. It helps move the plot alomg, not every chapter can have an excitment or catastrophy.

I really like this story! I'm a sucker for love confessions...How's thet revenge plot coming along? **sprouts devil horns** grr! **pokes horns back down in her head**.

I hate school too, I have to read The Epic of Gilgamesh. I can'r prnounce every other word. I have chemistry and algebra as well, **groans**. I can't wait until the next break!

Update Again Soon,

Your Faithful Reviewer,

Majestyic

Thank you for the hug! ;)

Lavender,

I'm finally back, and school started too! Wow! I missed *3* chapters! I'll just have to make up for it with reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally long reviews...but hey, those are my specialties! *winks* It *figures* that Eliha decorated Sirius' porn side...I thought it'd be, but knowing me I'd probably be wrong. *sighs*

I absolutely ADORED this chapter. It was SO completely awesome! I loved the whole Lily-Nick scene, and how Lily wasn't getting along with Nick...poor thing! lolz Oh, and I liked "Mr. Evans then came in and kissed Lily on the cheek, then raised an eyebrow at Nick, as if challenging him to make a move on his daughter while they were alone. He certainly couldn't trust this one. He'd been at an all-boys academy for six years, either he was some hormone-crazed demon, or, well..." how funny was that? (I'll answer that ?) VERY funny. Hilarious, more like it.

The whole yellow bikini thing was great. I love that idea so much, but I have trouble picturing her in yellow...I'll have to think that one over...yellow...Lily...redhead, green eyes...right, moving on. :) The Jessica/Lily emnity (is that the right word? I think so) was great. Maybe I'm the only one who likes it, but I thought it adds an interesting little twist to the story. The whole beach thing, and Bahamas, was great. I absolutely loved it!

Oh, and you dance? What kind? I do ballet & lyrical/modern. I'm taking tap & jazz again this year as well, but I haven't done them in a few years. Oh, and one more note...Cassie Claire's story I *adore* and Barb's story is awesome...I'm loving the 3rd installment of the Trilogy! I never read Lost. But...Sierra's story is great, guys who are reading it! She's awesome (and my friend, so if I don't promote her story she'll probably reconsider her deal of beta-ing my to-be-posted-someday-in-the-future story) and deserves heaps of praise, so go read "Eyes..." (as it's easier to write than the whole entire title) right now! You gotta luv Sierra's sense of humor...I was cracking up...so read it!

And Anonymous person who asked awhile back "how DO you do it?" referring to long reviews...I just babble on and on and on and on...I tend to babble a lot though, which is partly Sierra's fault. I gotta go now...awesome chapter!

Luv ya, Britz

Great story! Please write some more. Honey666 liked it too, but she doesn't give reviews.

Can't explain why, but thank her like I did, for giving me this story. And I just want to ask

how people get so great ideas. I've written some stories myself, but they aren't that great.

So please give me advice!

Oh my goodness! This story is very good. It was recommended to me as a really good L/J fan fic. I hope I can write as good as you, when I finally try! I want to be an author, but never can seem to find the time to write anything...I usually prefer to be bored *rolls eyes* but I make up stuff in my head all the time. You should be an author. Really. If you do try to become one, I wish you luck! Just wish me luck...

I love this story! It is so cute, and I'm starting to really hate James's dad(ok, more than hate). Your characters are so realistic! I'm going to read your other stories now, so tata!

Off the record, I can tell you that many people at the age of 17 can and will profess undying love for their darlings. They just may not feel such intense love 10 years later. (smirks...)

For the record(and now for the serious business), I LOVE this story. Sure, it has its shortcoming, which I'm sure you noticed already: the plot is rather bare and illogical; also, sometimes the narrative doesn't flow. Maybe it's the grammar, I'm not sure. But you've created some adorable character, like Jessie(I adore her!), and the execution of your tale is great(and rarely seen). Keep it up! I ADORE this!