Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I hate you! This story is SOOO good.. its not like all those other ones where there are no problems (even though i write those too) and its not all mushy, and "james has no problems" and "both are filthy rich" stories.. its just SOOO good.. and not so far out there... btw sorry for the reviewing all the others.. i just started this one tonight and fell in love with it.. i couldnt stop reading to review... but i hope you come out with the next chapter soon... its just awesome... your a great author and keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it havent happend to me either but I belive in never diying love! Meaning: love has no age, you can find the love of you life, your soul mate at age 7 playing in the park or at age 20 in a mall... And, the "in you face Flanders" is based on the simpson but is an expresion that we use when we have it or way. |
![]() ![]() Hey I think that this story is the best that I ever read. It really caught my eye. But wut really makes this story really cute is that u made James fall for Lily and that they both care for each other and that James will stop at nothing to get her. I think that is the sweetest thing that I have ever read and I don't even like reading. I hope u make a book like thiswhen u're older cuz u're really good at it. keep writing chapters and i look foward to reading them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's me again, pilikika. I love this story! (as I have said countless times)It's by far one of my favorite's on this website(I also love your falling trilogy)(again countless times) anyways, I read before that you love dance... So do I love love love it! It's like my oxygen, anyways write more soon please! also write more on falling into grace...that one is really good too... *pilikika |
![]() ![]() ![]() noooo! you can't leave me like this! upload, upload, UPLOAD! MOOORRRRE... okay, now that i'm done acting like the lunatic i am, I would like to say that this story is AWESOME and i shall be waiting expectantly for the next chapter... and that this is going on my favs list. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was such a great story! please write more! |
![]() ![]() This is really great, I love this, and I hope that you'll continue! |
![]() ![]() This is really great, I love this, and I hope that you'll continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been reading your stories for a long time and i love them all! This one especially! You are an awsome writer and i think you shuld be a proffesional writer some day, you definatly have the potential to be one! Your stories are deep and moving. I love em! Allie |
![]() ![]() too short! write more soon! i cant wait:) i love it! |
![]() ![]() Im not done with my summer h.w. yet,but I think I can manage... I just finished reading chapter 6...and I gotta say,it was REALLY interesting. Now,I have to read chapter 7. Oh,and for the record,I did really poor last year. The 4th quarter average,also known as the last,I got was lower than the 1st quarter average at the begginning of the year. This year,Im gonna try to do better. And that,ladies and gentlemen,is why I NEED to do my summer h.w. I suppose I COULD stay up until 2-3 in the morning doing my h.w.,wouldnt matter,I think Im sick. I also think I have a fever. My mother took me to the doctor,and got me perscriptions to get medicine for the sickness. HEY! I just realized something. You mean you didnt figure it out YET? I made a LONG review! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! |
![]() ![]() If you don't finish this story, i don't know what I'll do but it will invlove a hell of a lot of e-mails! So if you don't wnt me stalking ou by e-mail.s I suggest you continue soon. Great Story!1 like I said it would be a shame not to continue it!1 The minnesotan in England marzoog Just so you know i was joking about the stalking by e-mail part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :does a little dance: Yaay! I got reconized. : p I love this chapter. Poor Lily... Poor James. But I still love the idea of the Hole. lol Ha, I wish I could shuv my siblings in there... Bwha. Sorry- I side tracked. .; I love this story, and you write it so well! No other author could pull this off. : p I can't wait to read more. : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great. and it isn't at all stupid to be able 2 fall in love at 17. especially for a couple like Lily and James. |