Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() PLEASE write more! I luv this story! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE write more! I luv this story! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE write more! I luv this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No i need more emmotional please - but anyway i thought it was awesome - Lex - Lilys Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Please go on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey great chapter as always, I always look forward to readin new chapters of ya story! and dont listen to all these ppls baggin it coz they dont no a good story if it came and smacked em in da face! it's great that u take ur writing seriuosly coz it means u put more effort into each chapter which makes em great, fantastic and awesome to read juz like ur otha chapters. i'm totally hooked on this story, i luv ur characters, the plot and everything thing bout it... so i'm gonna put it on ma fav list... looking forward to when u next update... A MAJOR FAN ...KaTiE |
![]() ![]() positively brilliant, lovely orginal stroyline |
![]() ![]() Another brilliant chapter (though a little short, ) C'est bien! You're right I do speak French I'm continuing my study of it though. I want to learn Spanish though also. Anyways, I love your inventive part about Sirius' family, it's so inventive, consider that a very large compliment. You're a SUPERB writer, and your plot is wonderfully original. Amour and Bubbles, Thanks for updating so soon! Ma'hi - your greatest fan! |
![]() ![]() Another brilliant chapter (though a little short, ) C'est bien! You're right I do speak French I'm continuing my study of it though. I want to learn Spanish though also. Anyways, I love your inventive part about Sirius' family, it's so inventive, consider that a very large compliment. You're a SUPERB writer, and your plot is wonderfully original. Amour and Bubbles, Thanks for updating so soon! Ma'hi - your greatest fan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, a bit short maybe but good all the same. WRite more soon. |
![]() ![]() Your story is really good. I don't like James' father but your not supposed to. I just wanted to let you know that I like your story so far. |
![]() ![]() ::grins:: I needed a hug :) great chappie keep it up |
![]() ![]() yay a new chappie im so excited i read ur other stories they're really good too. keep goin wit this one tho i love it |
![]() ![]() LOOOOVE this! it's really good! :) cant wait for the next chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! A BEAR HUG! **smiles happily like a four year old child** lalalala! This was a great chapter, I lughed, I cried...**sigh**. Sirius and his father reconciling was beautiful **wipes tears from eyes**. Lily getting back with her best-friend **tears well up again**. Nick decided that he wanted to snap all magical wands in half. I thought that that was good. I loved the line 'Her life was going to hell in a handbasket' can i use it some time? **Grins and raises eyebrows**. There is nothing wrong with professing love at 17, hell, I'm 15 and I have been in love twice. Love is the same at any age. 'Age is just a number baby!'. Don't let big meanie heads **mumbles** like Charles Potter GET you down. They're just jealous that they didn't think to write something like that. **Nods** mhmm that's the truth! :D . Oh, it won't hurt my feelings if you don't read my story. It's crummy anyway...lol I got into a fight with my muse again lol. I hope that you update soon. Psst! I want more: Nick and Remus! **yells so everyone can hear her** I LOVE REMUS! yay! ;) |