Reviews for Illicit Love
Gooey Gooey Coca Beans chapter 7 . 9/1/2002
Why would people have such a problem with peopple confessing love? I was acutally talking to somebody about this, how young is too younk to know if you're in love or not? If you meet your soul mate when you're young, why should you put it off just pecause you think you're too young? The great mysteries of life, right?

Anyway, this was a very good chapter. Lemme guess, though, James will get get jelous of... what's his face (Lily's friend)... and they'll get in a fight or something. Of course Lily loves him... How could you not? I'm wondering how Lily didn't react much to last chapter's little "I think I'm falling in love with her" outburst James had at lunch.

I really love your story, please continue it soon!
Megan Lisay chapter 7 . 9/1/2002
Wonderful chapter! What WILL Lily do now about Nick? Sorry my review's so short, but I've got to go.
princess pixie ice chapter 7 . 9/1/2002
wow i love this story. the writing got unbearably small in this chapter but to show how much i love this story i squinted and strugled until the last word...oh well love this story neway update soon
Guest chapter 6 . 9/1/2002
omg, you have to continue
Calypzo chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
I like this story... You can consider this six reviews or if you want i'll review the other chapters, doesnt matter to me. Write more of this soon. Plz... Peace
katoozytoo lazy to sign in chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
GREAT STORY! UPDATE MORE! MORE! MORE! StUpId James's dad. (forgot his name) EVIL LITTLE RACIST DUDE! ehehehehe...i mean...well...against mudbloods. sheesh, i would be suprised if he was in gryfindor... _
Majestyic chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
**eyes widen in fear** awh awh!

**runs away and crys waling something about Charles Potter being 'a really big meanie hea'**

Ahem, okay I'm better now...Jeez, James' father is a real bastard! **runs up to James' father and kicks him in the shins, sticks her tongue out at him and runs away** grrr. I really liked this chapter. I figured that something like this would happen at some point. I thought that Mrs. Potter's drunken(ess) was typical, but still highly amusing. I hope that Jess and Lily become better friends, 'cause that would suck for Lily. Is Charles Potter a death eater? He almost sounds like one...**shrugs, gives James' father the finger** I really don't like him...lol. I hope that you update soon and have a little revenge for Lily. I think she deserves it. Read my stories! I have a marauders one called 'The Heavens Wept That Day' ;)

Majestyic ;)
Rhi and tiff chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
hey we love your story please write more asap thanks

rhi and tiff
Ma'hi chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
Lovely, though I must say it was a long time waiting. You're killing me here. I loved the dinner scene, poor Lily. Wonderful characters in Mr. and Mrs. Potter.

Update soon, poor moi!

I LOVE your fic!

Amour and Bubbles,

Ma'hi
Meghan chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
Poor Lily and James. I feel so sorry for them. It's so sweet that Jessica hugged Lily, I really love this!
Megan Lisay chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
You are a very talented writer! Take it from someone who knows, that's not something to waste! I suggest you seriously consider writing professionally.
Dark Angel171 chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
do write more! I liked and especially this chapter okie dokie! Is James gonna break up with Lily? or is he gonna fight is father and do what he thinks is right? Please hurry
Jess the Great chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
Down with Dad Potter! Down! (forms angry mob and sets fire to Dad Potter's robes) OH, HO HO HO!

See, I knew Jess wasn't evil. All Jesses are cool. : p I love this story. It's going on my favourites. : )
Jess the Great chapter 3 . 8/31/2002
I love this story so far. : ) Jessica isn't really evil... she's just looking out for her brother. Like Tskasa's sister in Hana Yori Dango... like you have a clue what I'm talking about. Ok, I'm gonna shut up and read more. : )
Guard Girl chapter 6 . 8/31/2002
Well, that was depressing. *lol* Write some more, please, and make it more upbeat! Have his Dad be killed in a freak-Muggle accident or something. haha! Then James can have Lily. Afterall, he has to, am I right? Then where's little Mr. Harry Potter suppost to come from? Ooohh... possibly a secret affair? *giggles evily* I'm getting a fanfiction idea, but I doubt I'll ever go through with it. Keep up the good work!
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