Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like the twist...but anyways,...awesome! please read and review my story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like! |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter, this is such a great fic, I laugh through the entire thing. Your character developments are great. This is so unique, all of the other L/J are mostly boring love/hates. Your idea is brilliant! Love (and Bubbles), Ma'hi(2) Update soon, or I'll...er...do something really, really...bad? Don't mind me, just update your super fic soon, pour moi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ya! I love this story! you know how some stories aren't believable? well, don't worry hun, this one is not only believable, but it kicks butt! (not up to swearing in a review, sorry) um, ya I was gonna say something else, oh ya! that's cool that you were at dance camp, I dance too!( as you can probably tell from my name) how fun, well, ya so...Continue soon, please! |
![]() ![]() hehehe great chapter! I'm really looking forward to chapter 6 P...any chance of getting the rating upped to an R? Your a brilliant writter, keep on writting D |
![]() ![]() YOU KNOW THAT WAS GREAT,BUT NOW,I WANT TO SEE JAMES FATHERS WEIRD... AS LONG AS WERE RECCOMMENDING FICS,ID SAY... 'The Boy Who Loved Lily'BY Rinoa I PRACTICALLY GAVE HER OVER A HUNDRED AND SOMETHING REVIEWS JUST TO GET HER TO UPDATE! ON ANOTHER SUBJECT: NO I DIDNT MEAN YOUR STORY IS GETTING BORING,I MEANT THAT I COULDNT BEAR WRITING LIKE KNOW,IN LONG PARAGRAPHS LIKE SHE TRULY HAS A GIFT FOR THAT...WELL COMPARED TO ME. NOW,ILL TRY HARDER. THAT WAS FUNNY!BUT...ONE QUESTION,IS YOUR YARD REALLY THAT COLORFUL? GUESS I FAILED! _YRS OF SCHOOL,ALL DOWN THE DRAIN! MIGHT AS WELL CALL A PLUMBER...::mumbles::...see if I can get my Dignity back...::mumbles:: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I really like this story. Please continue it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was good, I laughed about Sirius' room being half sports and half playboy. Your not going to make something really embarrassing happen to Lily are you? **Thinks for a moment** yeah, that would actually be a good idea lol, make for a good story **grins**. I am eagerly awaiting an update. If you like L/J fics, i have one called 'The Heavens Wept That Day' if your interested **shrugs** I hope you update again! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() quick, quick, next chapter, im holding my breath and i cant hold it for long! feline13 gr8 ffic, btw |
![]() ![]() hey! nice chappie i luv it write more soon;x! xoxo SARA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story! I Love it so much! You have to conitnue! |
![]() ![]() Great story can't wait for more. I agree Evan Angles Fall is a great story. please update soon. |
![]() ![]() Jessica is kinda scary, but I can understand why. I still really like the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Anyway, keep posting and I'll be waiting for my glass of sand and moldy boot! |
![]() ![]() ah hahahaha... wait... why am i laughing... hmmmm... maybe i just needed to get that out of my system... SORRY ABOUT MISSING CHAPPIE 3! i havent been on the internet for aaaaaaaaaaaaages... but at least this way i had TWWWWWOOOOOOOOOO chapters to read... eeeexcellent! (sorry... my unability to spell annoys me one heck of a lot) THERE IS NO MORE! but at least you didnt leave it at a cliffie... i HATE it when that happens... MAR I SAY! MAR! oooooooooooooh! do *I* get a broooooooom? eh heheheh... broom... tee hee... the hole sounds... interesting... smelly socks? nooooooooooooooooooooooo! NOT THAT! my worsterest nightmare... apart from the one when i ended up sitting a bathroom with my friends and the Queen of England singing Backstreet Boys songs... god... that was scary... true story... i DID dream that... freaky... NOW THEY KNOW HOW MY MIND WORKS! *backs away into a little corner* WAIT! did i just say "NOW THEY KNOW HOW MY MIND WORKS"? AH HA! I DID! AND DO YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS! I *HAVE* A MIND! eeeexcellent! anywho... back to praise and comments... this... this... El*'i' with funny dash thingo*ha person sounds interesting! and whats this about name meaning something in ELLLLLLLLVISH! eh hehehe... elvish... tee hee... so whats gonna happen with james and lily-o? (funny question time... fun fun fun!) will they ever be able to stay together? why does sirius's dad want to be part of his sons life after so long? what is with james's dad... umm.. yes.. well... that is all i can come up with cause i'm a lazy bugger... but anyzwho... PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASE WRITE MORE! I MUST HAVE MORE! I NEEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! yay! happy! off to read FG now! fun fun! YAYAYAY! Untill the next chapter Jen |