Oh,Lavender..

Okay dont kill trying to type a long review like Britz.(No offense or anything Britz,but...)Okay this is gonna be B-O-R-I-N-G!So,I better trap you and force you to read this...

First,have you read any other stories you might want to reccomend (to poor,sweet ol me)?

Because ive read many fanfictions until FINALLY I decided to click on the reviewers to get to their while I was there,I found other stories that were good enough for me to recommend if you ever ask me.

But of course,I also want to know,do you reccommend anything,anybody?

You know,maybe I shouldnt review...It would end up me being in the Hole,but then,at least,when I come back,Ill know what to write about and Ill be able to leave a long time,no empty spaces,just words.

:(But then,NO prizes!:(

Boy,I SURE hope this will be worth it!

This is getting SO boring,I cant bear this ANYMORE!

Britz...How DO you do it?

I love this story! D It's really original and I like the way your looked past the sterotype veiw that only wizards who practise dark magic look down on people who are half bloods and muggleborn. Please continue )

Another excellent story, lol i wish i could be half as good a writer as you!

Hey, I really liked this story, please describe Nick and write about the barbecue in the next chapter! Please post sooooooon!

Ack! I'm so sorry, but I accidently hit 'Submit Review' and now I've forgotten where I was...oh, right. About Lil's mom.

That was so funny, with her calling that guy...Nick! Right, well, I have a question about that part. I'm going to take a guess and say that they were close friends and he fell in love with her, but she (obviously) loves James. However, it was a little confusing with how you wrote that paragraph on the beach...I'm so interested in where you're gonna go with the whole Nick thing, you've no idea. I like it a lot, it adds a big twist to the story's plot, by not only having James' dad disapprove of their relationship, but having Lily's mom not too happy with it. Definitely adds a VEY interesting twist to the whole thing. *grins*

Next-Sirius in Brazil. Wow. That's the best word I can think of to sum THAT up. His room was so funny...I know you meant for us to realize which person arranged which half, but I'm rather dense...who did the Playboy side? I'd have to hope his dad but maybe since Eliha was a model she'd think he'd be into it...or...what? I'm so confused! Help me! Oh, and does Sirius refer to his father as 'Carlos' or does he call him 'Dad' or 'Father' or whatever father is in Portuguese? Just wondering. Great job on that whole thing though, like I said, Portuguese father is EXTREMELY originial, and I love it so much!

Lastly...Sirius & James. Ok, I actually *don't* have much to say about it *hears gasps of astonishment* but wait for it! Ready? It was BRILLIANT and soooooooooooooooooo times like a BILLION sweet! I loved how you ended it, even if it was *cough* WAY too short for my likings. I liked Sirius' reaction to Jessica helping too...Jessica's like the fallen angel, isn't she? Helps her brother, but's still a b**** lol. In any case, **I** like her personality and everything, but hey-I'm rather strange.

You did such an excellent job on this chapter, and I'm loving this story more and more. You're very welcome for the long reviews, I know I appreciate them, so I figured most people do too. I like giving my opinion especially when I know that there is a lot of potential for the story-and yours is so great! Take no mind of Legolas'SEXYbitch's comments...you're excellent, and *I* got the point of Sirius calling Lily a Mudblood. He didn't mean it, it's just telling James what was to come if he fell for Lily...that his Daddy would disapprove and whatnot. Oh, and what's with the Greensleeves mugs & hats...? I'm confused! I love Greensleeves though, so even if I don't have one...*hums the tune* there you go. Awesome chapter, sorry for not logging in, you're welcome for long reviews...um...sorry for this being split in two, it was my stupidity for that one, but it'll show up as more reviews! That's good, right? Oh, and if you update in a week or less, I'll be away, but don't think you'll have gotten rid of me-when I'm back, I'll be checking to see if you've updated! Great job again!

Luv ya,

Britz

Lavender,

I'm so sorry, but I'm not going to login right now. I'm the same Britz that has been following your story, and I'm still loving it completely! I loved the four sections you (more or less) split this chapter into. I'm going to just split my comments into four sections to make my life and yours easier. :)

First-omg, I was DYING once I read that first part with James and his Dad. It was so hilarious, I was laughing so hard when I read it, you've no idea. Oh. My. God. I can't believe you had him say: "You go on ahead with that cute little redhead. I'll allow it for now. Merlin knows you need a sex kitten - experience never hurt anyone - and you need some. I was rolling on the floor. I loved that part so much, so well done! *applauds Lavender* I liked how Jessica helped him out...and James' reaction to Lily being his 'Girl of the Week' It was so sweet! How he feels about her, I mean. Excellent job on that note.

Next part...Lily's mom. I forgot to comment on that last review, but I was LOVING it. Her mom is playing match-maker! How hysterical is that?

Good story! I appreciate the free merchandise as well :)

Real nice... but why a cliffhanger. WHHHHHHHHY? It's killing me. I really want to know what's going to happen...you have got to add as soon as possible...

Desperate wacky girl 2002

I luved that chapter!

Heh heh great idea for Sirius' room it was funny when i read coz i'm on a totall high..LOL

Hmm i have no ides what to make of Jessica yet it seems that she nice deep down or she wants sumthign off James..I have no idea and i wanna read more bout her and Sirius weird dad and his wife!

Hmm and i dont like lily's mum interfering in her luv life i mean wot bout poor james?

Well ya great story coz its soo diff

newayz i'm totally looking forward to the next chapter/s

awe, sweet!:):)

Hi! Guess Who?

Its me again! Im like becoming adicted to this fic. Which means that youre going to hear a lot from me!

Love the chapter, I just dont get the moms like Lilys mom, I mean she already has a boyfriend why she wants her to go out with that Nick. The hole Sirius/Dad part was fun.

Read you soon

Bye

Clavel

I really like this story. I have a question though, is James' mom dead or what? 'Cause u haven't really had her in the story. Anyway awesome job. Keep up the gret work!

I'm BAAAAAACK! He he he! I really really really really really like this story too, but you better get the next chapter of the Trilogy up before I explode! I don't care if you only put it up like yesterday. Lol, just kidding. This is a great story, very intresting and well-composed. Keep it up!

I'm impressed, this is really good!

Wow...that was good! I don't like James' dad. I read the authors note and everything, and I agree with you, but I still don't like him. Can't wait to see what happens!