Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() Thanks for the compliment! Ma'hi Ma'hi is the name of a tropical Hawaiian fish, my best friend and we heard about it together in Sci class, so she's Ma'hi1 and I'm Ma'hi2, so together we're Ma'hi Ma'hi. Anyways, another great chap from my fav author, I love your story, update soon, you're a wonderful author, I love your portrayls of Sirius, James, and Lily. ( That part about Sirius' dad was hilarious!) Love and Bubbles, Ma'hi |
![]() ![]() *Humming..* Anyway, this story is so FUNNY. I love Sirius and his trouble with Portugese. I have the exact same problem, except not in Portugese. I absolutely love your story, and love reviewing it so i can get a whole collection of souveneirs, lol. Update SOON! POST ASAP! |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! From the first paragraph you had me hooked I guess I'm a sucker for anything that has to do with a hot guy! I can't wait until you post more chapters. Its got both of my favorite elements... boys and the magical world of harry potter! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() sweet! i luv this story... u have ne more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry that someone flamed you-I, on the other hand (the NICER hand-gives whoever the hell that was an infamous Escritora demonic glare) love this so much! It was on the fav stories of one my of reviewers so I decided to read it. Good decision, huh? I'm gonna add it to my own fav stories, and then go eat Checkers! Mwahaha... Update. Now. Or I will be forced to turn an innocent shar-pei breeding farm into an attack squadron on your fingers, as I'll arm them with biology class probes. (evil laughing) Adios! Toriiiiiiiiiiiii |
![]() ![]() AHEM! HELLLLLLLLLOOOOOOO! ::FAKE AUDIENCE FAKE APPLAUSES FOR UNWANTED GUEST:: THANK YOU!THANK YOU!NO STOP- ::APPLAUSE STOPS ABRUPTLY:: ::IN AN EXTREMELY DRY VIOCE::YOURE MAKING ME BLUSH. THAT WAS OKAY.I FEEL A LITTLE BORED BECAUSE YOU DIDNT PUT LILYS POINT OF VIEW IN THERE. THE REASONS I PLACED IN MY LAST REVIEW,WERE ANSWERS TO YOUR 'QUESTIONS' IN CHAPTER 3. THE STORY 'THE GILDED LILY' IS ***REALLY*** GOOD! PERSONALLY,I THINK IVE HEARD THE PLOT SOMEWHERE ELSE;IN A ROMANCE NOVEL I THINK... NOW, I MUST BE OFF- ::FAKE AUDIENCE APPLAUSES FOR UNWANTED GUEST;LEAVING:: UNTIL NEXT TIME,DEAR LAVENDER! ::BURSTS INTO GIGGLES:: ::STOPS GIGGLING:: HEY! THEY WANTED ME TO-TO *LEAVE*! ::WAILS:: OH! MY! GOD! IM-IM THE THE- FEMALE VERSION OF-OF GILDEROY LOCKART! OH THE HORROR!OH THE HORROR! |
![]() ![]() Well this has been a happy reading. I dont like that Charles Damian Potter, I dont mean he is mean but sometimes some people irks you in the wrong way. I know how those prejudice are, I went to a richy rich kind of school (academic and atletic schoolarship) I hate it there, even when my friend werent really like that, their parents and other society friends were awful. Sometimes I can feel really sorry for rich kids, sure they can have anything that money can buy, but they have far more less freedom that the rest of the comon kids. Well Im really and unpaliently looking for the next chapter. Till then Clavel PS Post Soon! very, very Soon! And sorry for the lausy grammar, Im from Mexico and this isnt my strong point. |
![]() ![]() Moving to next chapter! Still loving it! |
![]() ![]() Oh Im loveing it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lavender, Wow! Another excellent chapter! I really enjoyed it and was SO excited when I saw that you had updated! I wish the chapter had been longer though :( but I'll get over it! Please, please, *please* help me and get another nice & long one out soon! *gets on hands and knees and begs* Thanks SO much for responding to me at the end of the chapter, I really appreciate that. I do that for my reviewers too, and I love that you show that you received & read our reviews so we aren't wasting our time. I loved the whole message that James gave to Lily when he "officially" asked her out. It was sooo sweet and sooo romantic! I was like "awwwww!" when I read it. I'm so glad you got some L/J romance in there-I love L/J fics a lot, and you demonstrated perfect interaction between them in this story! Jessica Potter has SUCH a great character. Her whole aura, and the face that she gives everyone-that sort of sickly sweet (fake) attitude that changes once she's alone with James. I think she's kind of looking out for James, with warning him, even if it's at Lily expense. Obviously, James isn't going to give her up, but I just enjoyed Jessica's character, it was really well-written. Obviously she was a bit rude with Lily, but like I said, I think she's protecting James by trying to get rid of Lily. As we've seen...Mr. Charles Potter isn't really happy with Muggle-borns or Half-borns now is he? lolz. The idea of the Hole is rather original AND actually, a rather great idea. I mean, it's horrid for those in it, obviously, but I've never heard of it at all. It's like that whole Sirius' father is Portuguese thing! Brilliant! lol Awesome job on the whole thing! A little longer and I'll be sooo happy! PLEASE get the next one out soon! I'll love you FOREVER and EVER! Luv ya, Britz |
![]() ![]() ![]() what 3 chapters in 7 days? it's been lik a month since u updated u're new falling story, n i lik that one better. actually i haven't even read this one but thats just cuz I'm appaled that u haven't updated the other 1. but yeah. I really really like that other 1.. er whats it called again falling into grace.. right? anyway yeah pwease update it for lil ol me? ok whatever bye ~kool-aid (the storyless author) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omigod I can't believe that James's Dad is so cold and anyway great story and please continue adding. your story totally rocks . so please addddddddddddddd |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is the best! please keep going, I love it! |
![]() ![]() good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, wow, what the hell is his problem? So, are the going to be doing the hole society thing? You sould read The Gilded Lily by Mandy! It's the best ever! |