Reviews for Illicit Love
legolas'sSEXYbitch chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
nice story but it doesn't make sense. would sirius call lily a MUDBLOOD if he was in GRYFFINDOR? and when HE is a HALF BLOOD? it just sounds like shit to me no offense
martini addict chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
Wow! A hat too! I love reviewing your stories! I would also like a happy little green-painted coffee mug. I feel so bad for James! He genuinely like Lily, right? It's not just a fling, right? This story just keeps getting better! I wonder what's gonna with Lily and that neigbor boy too! EEEEEEEE, I'm so excited now! UPDATE ASAP!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
IT DOESNT MATTER;IN FACT,WHEN I FIRST SAW HOW LONG IT WAS,I WAS THINKING You know...it might be TOO long...

Now,will you PLEASE excuse me...?

YAY! YOU UPDATED! !

*A-HEM!*

OH! {*Blushes Furiously*} SORRY;ILL JUST BE GOING NOW...

MOST OF THE TIME I FORGET;ALL OF THE TIME IM EITHER IN A RUSH TO READ OR THE MOST LOGIC REASON,...

[Drum Roll]

***IM TOO LAZY!***

NOW,

DONT YOU THINK-

I DESERVE TO *GET* MY HAT NOW?
lilz chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
cool.

i feel sorry 4 lily. parents can be very interfering with stuff like that. am i allowed a hat and a cupcake? i havnt had them yet.
Ma'hi chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
I LOVE your story; it's great, so creative, update soon, pour moi!

Merci,

Love and Bubbles, Ma'hi

I just love your story; it's brilliant!
jujubee chapter 3 . 8/19/2002
this is really good. it's pretty interesting. it's not what i thought it would be, but it's good. write more soon
Coeur De Lion chapter 2 . 8/19/2002
CONTINUE! PLEASE!
martini addict chapter 2 . 8/18/2002
Thanks for the cupcake! Anyway, I really, really like your second chapter so far. But it kinda sucks with the whole blood thing. I mean, poor Lily! Oh well, I can't wait for the next chapter because I know it should be good! Update ASAP!
Megan Lisay chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
I love it! Finally something with style and flair!
happy2 chapter 2 . 8/18/2002
Amazing story! A great dash of reality with parents seemingly disapproving their offspring's choice of a partner. Can't wait for more!
Annon chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
HEY LAVENDER?

TO MAKE THIS LESS CONFUSING,IM GOING BY THE NAME 'ANNON.'ITS SO YOU DONT GET ME CONFUSED WITH THE OTHER _ OKAY?

{I AM THE SECOND ONE WITH THE LONG REVIEW}
Guest chapter 2 . 8/18/2002
FINALLY!IM !{URE WELCOME!}

OH WELL,ENOUGH OF MY GIBBERISH;WRITE MORE!

YOU KNOW,*NOW* WOULD BE A GOOD TIME TO START...

YOURE PURPOSELY TORTURING ME ARENT YOU?

YOU ARE!

HEY!WHERES *MY* HAT?
Lizzy Evans chapter 2 . 8/18/2002
Wow i really like where this story is going. Please update soon!
smartblonde4u22 chapter 2 . 8/18/2002
I LOVE THIS! This is soooo great. Please please please write lots more SOON.
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