Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() nice story but it doesn't make sense. would sirius call lily a MUDBLOOD if he was in GRYFFINDOR? and when HE is a HALF BLOOD? it just sounds like shit to me no offense |
![]() ![]() Wow! A hat too! I love reviewing your stories! I would also like a happy little green-painted coffee mug. I feel so bad for James! He genuinely like Lily, right? It's not just a fling, right? This story just keeps getting better! I wonder what's gonna with Lily and that neigbor boy too! EEEEEEEE, I'm so excited now! UPDATE ASAP! |
![]() ![]() IT DOESNT MATTER;IN FACT,WHEN I FIRST SAW HOW LONG IT WAS,I WAS THINKING You know...it might be TOO long... Now,will you PLEASE excuse me...? YAY! YOU UPDATED! ! *A-HEM!* OH! {*Blushes Furiously*} SORRY;ILL JUST BE GOING NOW... MOST OF THE TIME I FORGET;ALL OF THE TIME IM EITHER IN A RUSH TO READ OR THE MOST LOGIC REASON,... [Drum Roll] ***IM TOO LAZY!*** NOW, DONT YOU THINK- I DESERVE TO *GET* MY HAT NOW? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool. i feel sorry 4 lily. parents can be very interfering with stuff like that. am i allowed a hat and a cupcake? i havnt had them yet. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE your story; it's great, so creative, update soon, pour moi! Merci, Love and Bubbles, Ma'hi I just love your story; it's brilliant! |
![]() ![]() this is really good. it's pretty interesting. it's not what i thought it would be, but it's good. write more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONTINUE! PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the cupcake! Anyway, I really, really like your second chapter so far. But it kinda sucks with the whole blood thing. I mean, poor Lily! Oh well, I can't wait for the next chapter because I know it should be good! Update ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Finally something with style and flair! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! A great dash of reality with parents seemingly disapproving their offspring's choice of a partner. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() HEY LAVENDER? TO MAKE THIS LESS CONFUSING,IM GOING BY THE NAME 'ANNON.'ITS SO YOU DONT GET ME CONFUSED WITH THE OTHER _ OKAY? {I AM THE SECOND ONE WITH THE LONG REVIEW} |
![]() ![]() FINALLY!IM !{URE WELCOME!} OH WELL,ENOUGH OF MY GIBBERISH;WRITE MORE! YOU KNOW,*NOW* WOULD BE A GOOD TIME TO START... YOURE PURPOSELY TORTURING ME ARENT YOU? YOU ARE! HEY!WHERES *MY* HAT? |
![]() ![]() Wow i really like where this story is going. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS! This is soooo great. Please please please write lots more SOON. |