Hey I like ur fic heaps it's soo umm lemme see refreshing i dunno y but its juz a diff style of writing to everyone elses and it has a diff story line as well so i guess that's wot makes it interesting..newayz i'm looking forward to more and i'll catch ya then..

Lavender,

Wow! Excellent, excellent job! I'm loving your story so much! It's well-written, has a great *interesting* plot, and...well, it's just completely awesome, in general. I love how Lily hangs out with "The Guys." I'm very impressed with how you write Lily's character, and even James'. You showed Lily as not being popular, but not being a geek, or too smart & perfect...just...regular, I guess. A person James never spoke too, but cool all the less. I love how she isn't too shy to speak to him, and hasn't gotten really angry with him like the love/hates (I used to love those, but they get old after awhile...) Your story is completely original!

I love how James is rich...you know, we haven't *met* his father per say, but I get this "Malfoy" ish feeling from how Sirius spoke about it. Like he couldn't bring Lily home because of her blood. It's descriptive, but keeps you wondering...you *will* let that happen, right? RIGHT? *smiles hopefully* I liked the whole yellow bikini thing-very cute. Will she get to wear it and...basically make James' jaw drop? lolz. I love how James was in that magazine too, original. Oh, and Sirius's father being Portuguese-now THAT is original! I've never heard his *father* being Portuguese, I love it! lol

You are doing an outstanding job! New chapter, please! I'll love you forever if you post soon, and a nice looooooong chapter too...? Could I get that lucky? I am so loving your story, I love L/Js, and yours is top notch! Please continue writing this, you're doing excellent, so keep up the great work!

Love ya, Britz

hi

very good chapter. plz write more soon and also a lot more of the falling series. how long is FG going 2 be? hopefully very long.

write loads more

lilz

this awesome :D

your story is 100% cool and you really have a great plot so you've got to add, add, add, add,add,add, adddddddd

Long Live LILY AND JAMES TALES

MAR! SSSSSHHHME! is all i have to say about that! mar... *grumble* MAR I SAYS!

yes... well... translation: I WANT MORE NOW!

that chapter was *thinks of a decent word* *discovers that this is too hard for her* *goes and gets a theasurus* wait... okay... this chapter is great, wonderful, fantastic, magnificent, excellent, terrific, cool, groovy, good, superb, breathtaking, amazing, astonishing, brilliant, incredible, super, tremendous, marvelous, remarkable, fabulous, awesome, sensational, super, splendid, glorious, outstanding, and yes... LOOK AT MY VOCABULARY! i never knew there was so many words for great. Wow... hehehe... i hope that shows how much i love your writing and demand that you write and post MORE! AND I NEEEEEEEED MORE FALLING INTO GRACE! when do you think you will post the next bit!

I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE where this is going! hmm... the whole James' dad hating muggle born peoples ect... WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN! DUN DUN DURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRN!

Well... please write more soon! or i will go wacko!

Untill the next chapter! (which i need VERY VERY soon)

Jen

More! More! More!

splendid! this story is really different from the rest! what i'm curious bout is, does lily like sirius MORE than a friend, or was she just complementing him as a fren? oh, n r james n lily a supposed-to-be item? and last but not least, wut does james' father have against muggle-borns?

yours sincerely (LoL)

::vIvIdLy gOrGeOuS::

ps: if u haf the time, please do be a doll and read my story? if ur busy, it's okay!

hi

this is a very cool story and you have to write more. its really good, a little bit of romance, a little bit of comedy - perfect.

OMG! That was awesome! Please continue. I loved how there was funny stuff and flirting and then romance at the end. ha ha sorry I'm going on and on-I really love this story though!

Awww. This is cute. It's fairly realistic too. You've got something good here-mystery, humor, romance. Keep this up.

I really like it! I can't wait for further chapters to come!

Can I just say that you are a master of writing summaries! Yes, your story was good, and I'm asking you to please write more(please!). But, really, your summary was one of the best I have ever read.

i like this story... it's pretty original... i don't think that i've read enough to give an accurate review... of what i've read so far it's good. write more soon