Reviews for Illicit Love
The Lady Reaper of the Shadows chapter 17 . 9/29/2003
Glad you like my name Lavender, i like it too. my sister came up with it (don't ask me how!) and is currently screaming at me for all the noise i was making about ten minutes ago when the first episode of season seven of Stargate Sg1 finished. *sigh* poor Jonas. Anyway, i'll let you get on with posting the next part now while i go and write a leeter of complaint, honestly, making ME wait a whole week for the second part of the fist episode of Stargate! talk about cheek!
Nymphadora51 chapter 17 . 9/20/2003
God this was such a sweet chapter! James was a little bit mushy, but who doesn't need that every once in a while. You have to hurry with the next chapter, you can't keep us waiting for something as big as james' proposal! And make it good as i know you will!
Rhima Ohks chapter 2 . 9/14/2003
So far the story is great! Having Sirius be half Brasilian is really cool! (or maybe i said that bcuz i'm brasilian...)
siriusforeva chapter 17 . 9/9/2003
Please go on. I didn't write a review sooner becasue i had to read the rest of your story first. Anyways it is a reakky good story. I would have to say that you have talent. Mabye you should be a writer.

Nat
HPMellie4evaandPadfootsGurl chapter 17 . 8/31/2003
Oh gosh I loved it. Email me at when you update! i love it. Cant wait for next chapter! Bye!
HPMellie4evaandPadfootsGurl chapter 16 . 8/31/2003
Hm... Do I hear wedding bells? Or see a ring? My other name is Hermione4eva1.. This is my co-writing name. Off to read the next chapter.
HPMellie4evaandPadfootsGurl chapter 15 . 8/31/2003
Oh gosh this is crazy. I love it.. Hmm shouldn't James suspect? Especially the teeth. Nice vampire touch.. This is going to be good. Im off to read the next chapter
HPMellie4evaandPadfootsGurl chapter 14 . 8/31/2003
Bug Bug cliffie... I loved the chapter though.. Weird how James says he almost despises his father yet he doesn't hate him... I know hundreds of people like that.
Hermione4eva1 chapter 10 . 8/31/2003
Ha ha... This is crazy.. You're stories are so good that people don't forget about them.. They wouldn't dare. They check daily to see if there are any more updates.. They are so desparate.. I'm glad you were basically finished when I started reading or else I wouldn't have been able to stand the suspense and the cliffies. I love it!
Hermione4eva1 chapter 9 . 8/31/2003
BIGG BIGG CLIFFIE! SUSPENSE SUSPENSE SUSPENSE! I HATE IT YET I LOVE IT! GREAT.. I ADDED YOU TO THE FAVS.
Hermione4eva1 chapter 8 . 8/31/2003
This chapter wss great!
Hermione4eva1 chapter 7 . 8/31/2003
Umm well.. It's good but I don't think he would go MAD if she didn't realize the way he felt about herand you're right Romeo and Juliet were only about 14 or 15 but then again is this supposed to be in the olden days? I don't think so. This is modern times and a boy, especially one like James in this story in particular because he is so used to having many girls so I don't think he would instantly know she was the one.. Maybe he would know that he liked her more than a piece of a** but I don't think he would know he was crazy in love and insane for her right now.. That's just the way I see it. It needs to be toned down. But other than that I love it!
Hermione4eva1 chapter 6 . 8/31/2003
Whoa! This chapter had alot of action. i loved it... It was like playing before me.. I loved it! I'm off to read the next one!
UnforgivenChild chapter 17 . 8/30/2003
aw! thats so sweet... i cant wait for the next chapter... i loved it... your style rocks... Im eagerly waiting for the next chapter... btw... good luck with senior year and your AP classes... i know ill need it too.. lol even tho im only taking one AP class... AP ART...
UnforgivenChild chapter 16 . 8/30/2003
OK... that took a REALLY REALLY long time... but ill forgive you... _ i love it... too short... but your writing style.. well kicks a**... ill read the next chapter when i get a chance... love it!
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