great story...PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT! i love the pllot, and you write really well...but please dont make lily a vampire! vampires are so gross. anyway, good luck with the rest of the story...and hurry up!

AH! I'm soo mad at you! you better get the next chapter out soon! asap if you dont mind! lol i've read all of the falling series (eagerly awaiting the next chap) and i've read this and i cant help but say... I'M OBSESSED! i never liked mwpp before, but now i love it! ah! ah! lol please hurry up and get the next chapter out i think i'll die if you dont soon! lol thanks for the amzing story!

You missed me? I'm touched!

I don't think I'd want to be a Dark Diva. It might be interesting but I think that I'd refer not to suck blood out of people.

I would do your Senior courses for you, but it looks like I'll be busy enough with my Freshman courses. ::gulps::

Oh, and I'm back to Minnesota. Fun stuff.

Actually that was sarcastic. Blah...

In Blah mood!

Anyway, loved this chapter. So sweet! And I can't wait for the proposal!

The Minnesotan

marzoog

PS. Thanks for coming out with this chapter so fast!

i started reading this fic today and i have to say, THIS FIC ROCKS MY SOCKS! okay, after that little outburst, i'm calmer D. i love the fact that james's father hates muggle borns. i mean, don't take this the wrong way. i hate james's father for being that way, but, it makes the story interesting. and the fact that lily may become the heir of the ramortias intrigues me. but i noe that she will never actually become a vampire because that would mean that she would have to be immortal and well, lily dies. so, i'm guessing that lily will somehow evade mina's plan to make her a vampire. plus, i can't wait to read about what james has planned for his proposal! in most fics that i have read, james usually takes lily to a part of the forbidden forest that he changes with magic. but the fact that james is proposing leads me to another question. how will james's father react to his son's engagement? of course, james will proceed with the wedding anyway. but, i think that jessica and james's mother may either help change charles potter's mind or just help james and lily plan their wedding. yes, i noe that u may be getting tired of reading this review so i'll stop. update soon!

I love the story i cant wait for u to update so hurry up plz!

~*nicole*~

Wow. Lovely story but I was a bit confused about the whole Josephine and Mina being a vampire thing but hey it was cool if a bit random! This probably isn't a very helpful review but I just wanted to let you know that i liked the story so plese update soon

Lou

Urgh! Cliffhanger! I don't think I like having James have the pureblood and Sirius a halfblood... probably because I've read OOTP so many times lol. I suppose James could be a pureblood as well, and then be abandoned because he married a muggle-born. Oh well, I love your story!

Nah, I'll let you handle senior year all on your own. Besides - it's fun. You'll want your own memories in any case, certainly not mine...it should be one of the best, if one of the hardest, years of your academic life. Have fun with it.

Nice little letter, though I'm certainly not fond of the proposal-in-a-letter type deals...I suppose I can swallow my disappointment, though, until you update your next chapter with a renewed look at said proposal.

Lots of luck with it, see you then!

I feel all fluttery inside. A good fluttery, of course. I just feel all warm, and that I could face anything that fate decided to throw at me at this moment. And it was you that made me feel this way! I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before, and I have to confess, it is a lovely feeling. I am so sorry that I haven't replied earlier. I have been away all this week, with my family, spending time with my nanna because she has cancer and there is nothing anyone can do about it. I feel as if I have been treading on ice all week, but when I came back home and found this, it made my day, week, even month!

Now, to the chapter.

All I want to say is aw. It is so aw-worthy. I normally have serious problems reading and watching romance (I'm fourteen and still can't watch romance in movies without covering my eyes and making a scene of myself), but the way you write it, I feel as if I am compelled to continue. I feel as if an invisible force is making me read your story. And thank the Lord for that invisible force, otherwise I would be missing out on one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.

There was absolutely no way you were biting my head off. It is really refreshing to find a author who actually takes the time out of their schedule to reply to their reviews. I take my hat off to you. It was also quite surprising to be thanked for my honesty (and what often accompanies it with me), bluntness, which I seem to have an abudance of.

One more thing, before I sign off. How did you survive the black out? I live in Australia, so I was black out free, but I heard about it over the news. I know that you live in America, and so, I was curious.

Tootles,

TheBlackCrayon

AWW...Plz write more soon, I'm soo excited to read when he proposes.

OOps... I forgot to read chapter 17, before I left a review for 16... but Oh well... this chapter was great too! The letter was very very sweet!

~mystikalolo~

I luved it! You were rite... not the way I expected it... but still, I'm glad it did end this way.

When you said "Lily decided it" d'you mean that the characters kind of just got out of your hands? Because that happens to me so much. And sometimes, I just get MAD at them! Lol... I must sound like an idiot.

Anyways, I hope another update is coming soon!

~mystikalolo~

Ur story is GREAT!But james was a seeker.

Write more PLEASE!

i really like your story, although i'm not done w/ it yet, please keep writing

Aw. This is so sweet! You're doing an excellent job keeping them all in character and all that. James is so cool, and Im glad Lily isnt a vampire. They scare me! Please update soon!