Reviews for Salvation
tinkerbear10 chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
I like it and hope there is more to it
Luckycharms14 chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
This is a great story you should Finnish it
mustlovertp chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
Jake is a monster.

Looking forward to the next chapter ;) xoxox
muzaklover chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
Loved the first 2 chapters. Can't wait for more.
Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Ok. Did they marry? Bella works part time righ?
Good premise
Lilypad10 chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
Very interesting!
Sarah Amin chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
loving this already .. cant wait for more !
Chilly Howdy chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Wow Jake sounds like a real prick huh! Sounds like he is off his rocker. I am glad that Bella and Seth got out of there but a beating to get her to leave.

Looking forward to see what happens next!

See you then

Chilly x
lleighton chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
I'm intrigued to see how this story develops - how does Cullen Mercenary fit in against Jake, a highly trained killing machine?
Canyaceme chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Wow! What a start! Charlie should have just taken Jake out in the woods and shot him then buried him!
Jenn1214 chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Jake is a sick puppy!
scrosby66 chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Great chapter...thanks for writing!
brittany86 chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
OcSickGirl chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Wow, I can't believe Charlie didn't just bust a cap in his ass or make him disappear all together. How sad that he slipped through the cracks. Don't soldiers have to go through some type of psyche eval when discharged?

Can't wait for more. :)
ewards bella chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
very interested to see how this story will play out
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