|Reviews for Also Adorable|
| Winter Anime Fan chapter 1 . 7/28
Good story and I'm so favouriting it. There were two mistakes I could see:
1) "In truth, he hadn't ever seen his captain this week" Unless you're saying Zoro didn't see Luffy for 7 days that "week" should be "weak".
2)" He had simply been reacted to his voice" "reacted" should be reacting.
Other than that this story is awesome, I love sick!Luffy fics where it's not something serious but the crew has to take care of him
| The Reading Elf chapter 1 . 3/15
This was cute!
| BlueStarLightCB chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Nice and sweet I loved it kind wish their was a bit more but great all the same :) keep it up :D
| FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
I WUV DIS SHIT!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Of Course and Obviously!
Oh Luffy... I think i'm jealous of you...! Lol
That was so Sweet...!
I Love it' :3
| ichigi111kurosaki chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
awwwwww, stories likd this are soooo sweet!
| Mad Hatter Usagi chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This was so cute! The only problem I saw was "In truth, he hadn't ever seen his captain this week." In which "week" is spelled wrong. It's supposed to be "weak." Sorry, I feel like a grammar nazi, but when I first read it, I thought that Zoro hadn't seen Luffy in 7 days, and that's not what you meant. Maybe someone's already told you this, I don't know, I just wanted to inform you if you didn't know. Gah, I feel like an idiot. I really did like this story though, good work!
| Chi du ciel chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
That's adorable :D
| deadhemoglobin chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Oh wow that was cute indeed. XD
Uhm, you mentioned mistake, so I think the mistake that I found is about the rooms? Well, uhm they don't have individual rooms. The guys share a room and they sleep in box hammocks... while the girls also share a room and I believe, share beds. Lol. (or two beds that they put side by side XD)
And yeah, I haven't heard of a sick Luffy yet. XD Anyway, I enjoyed reading. :) Thanks.
| Darkspider chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
*nods, nods* It's very RARE to see Luffy sick, even when he was a kid! But I loved that he has mentioned Sabo and Ace, though nobody really knows who Sabo is.
Hehe. Love this story! The nakama-feels are lovely!
| buslimpan chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Aw, how cute!
You did great with the story!