|Reviews for Agatha Emiya and the Fifth Holy Grail War|
| Damoclesvice chapter 1 . 3/1
So good...there should be more.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/18
Wonder how Lucrezia and Agatha are related in this storyverse. For that matter, what will the explanation be for Kiritsugu never teaching Agatha any magecraft.
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 3 . 12/2/2013
Kayneth, not Kainith. Also, the Church has only administered the Grail War since the third War, where Kirei's dad was the administrator. Still, this interesting. I'd heard of Girl Genius, but had never checked it out. I am now seriously considering it.
| Ryu Flemming chapter 3 . 11/30/2013
I would like to say that this is simply splendid to read and I hope you plan to update this soon. I would also like to say that you do good work, nice character development, *nice* cliff hangers (not the ones where they torture one with what is supposed to happen next but ones where they build up suspense) and I like Agatha.
Nice story and I hope you can get over your writer's block
| The Man chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
I liked the story. A scientist in the magic world. I hope to see more.
| CV12Hornet chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Lucrezia. Fucking Lucrezia. Well, there's our Big Bad.
| chaosglory626 chapter 3 . 11/16/2013
This is such a good story. You are right in saying Girl Genius doesn't get enough attention. I can't wait for more of this. Keep up the good work.
| chaosglory626 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I love you for writing this. I love both series so much and to see them together brings tears of joy to my eyes.
| Cylon One chapter 3 . 11/15/2013
I want to say that I am very happy to see that “Agatha Emiya and the Fifth Holy Grail War” is continuing and that it was a very worthwhile update.
I learned a bit about this Girl Genius stuff a short while ago and find it’s quite an interesting series.
It’s cool seeing her from that world as someone who lives in the Fate Stay Night one and being the Master of Saber.
As well as still having a hard time accepting that there is real magic in the world.
This is all around great and I look forward to next time, whenever it may be.
| BlueMirage chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
"But you know as well as I do that real artificial intelligence is one thing I haven't figured out yet, any even if I did it would be at least 3 Laws compliant."
I laugh at your attempt to make Agatha seem educated in the subject of AI morality. A character like Agatha would undoubtedly know that Asimov's 3 Laws of Robotics are far, far away from having any practical usefulness outside being an easy to grasp literary device. I find it far more likely that Issei would ask Agatha if her robots would be 3 Laws compliant, with her sarcastically replying 'They wouldn't be, because Asimov's 3 Laws don't work'. The 3 Laws is something a person can hear and think 'Yeah, that makes sense', because they're very easy to grasp which is why it's a rather appealing system for people that aren't very in-depth in the subject.
Have you watched 'I, Robot'? One of the points of that movie was about how Asimov's laws was NOT a sufficient system for robots to follow. The smartest AI in that movie, Vicky, came to the conclusion that in order to save as many as humans as possible from harm would be to lock as many humans into their own homes as possible. If she didn't, she would be harming them through inaction. She's following the rules she's been given, and she's trying to follow them the best she can. A lot of people seem to miss this point of the movie since it places a higher focus on Sonny, the 'Humane' robot.
A system far more likely to work:
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Great chapter, finally a rational person, it's too bad Shirou was not rational. Caster's Master realizes Kirei is not to be trusted. So AU that Kirei kills his father? Now that's new.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
Seems like a pretty nice crossover so far, though I would have to reserve judgment until you've written more. Also, I'm pretty sure that only guys are referred to the honorific of -kun.
| Skelo chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Nice update but Kirei didn't kill his father
| enderverse chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
You should remember that there's numerous canon examples of regular people building and repairing spark tech from blueprints. It seems like you are ignoring that to make it into magic. A direct connection to the technology section of the Akashic Records would be closer to canon.
Other than that this is a great story.
| Thespurgin chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Lucrezia and Agatha... let the bad things begin.