Reviews for Preludes
trickstercast chapter 1 . 8/22
This was incredible! I love your imagining of their first date and how you built up the suspense of what actually happened. The writing flowed like water and the whole story fit perfectly. Wonderful job!
raleighlane chapter 1 . 4/1
Loved loved LOVED this imagination of what their first date could have been and then all the sweet promises that their future will be even better! You are so very talented; thank you for sharing!
dcc chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
What a beautiful way to unfold and explore a missed moment! This was a delight to read.
PoppyMay chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
That was oh so adorable! You're a fantastic writer :)
Moonprincess92 chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
This is utterly gorgeous. Loved how you explored what might have happened and the way you wrote it was beautiful. :D
Fallyn Irlandes chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
This feels like something the Doctor would say, with brilliant words and flashes of color and look-what-might-have-been and look-what-will-be...this moment gave life, and it killed, and you've done a three-second imagined future inexpressible justice. I'm going to have to rewatch this, actually, since I haven't seen it since it aired except for the gif on tumblr of his hand over her shoulder...
Ah. 'tis a love story for the ages, and we will retell it and the moments that could have happened for ages to come.
agirlinblue chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I just wanted to let you know that despite the fact that I never, ever review fic I read (I know, I'm terrible), I loved this fic. Really, really loved it. I'm still grinning like an idiot. So...thanks, I guess.
Ayjah chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
What could have been but was delayed... Amazing
clandestine.elegance chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Oh my word this was perfect. I was so hoping someone would write about the night if she had been able to say yes. This was perfect. Thank you for writing it! It was everything I hoped for and more. The juxtaposition with the real world was brilliantly done.

Great job!
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
This was perfectly lovely! I was totally swept up in that first date magic with someone you really, really like. Wonderful. :)
izzybizzy333 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
You are an awesome writer if this is anything to go by! A pleasure to read, and very well written.
kaaterina petrova chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Oh my goodness - this was beautiful!

The date was gorgeous - and Darcy was such a gentleman it made me squeal.

And then it just came back to the normal bit and I was so sad for poor Lizzie!

This was great - well done!
ajbt720 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Holy crap that was so good! Anecdotes and movie references! Thank you for bringing this into existence.
irony882 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I think I left a review on AO3, but I'll write one again, anyway!
I really really enjoyed this story. Usually I'm more of a canon person than an AU person, but the way you've told this story is astoundingly beautiful. The emotions, the layers of depth in each of the characters you've captured is amazing. My favorite part, however, are the bits in parentheses. Cutting in the middle of the story, constantly reminding the audience that this is, in fact, an AU story. Speaking to the characters and about the characters as if they could actually hear you, but knowing they can't so you talk to them anyway. Instilling a sense of hope at the end. Beautifully, wonderfully crafted.
DorkQueen chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Beautiful and well-written! I love the way you used the roulette wheel of fate and I wish this really happened in the videos. :)
Keep writing!
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