Reviews for Dreams of Fire
copperheadstails chapter 22 . 2/21/2020
I keep reading your stories. they are all so good! it's rare that I love stories with lots of OCs but i really love yours. they are well made and not robotic/overly perfect or something.
gerrkles chapter 22 . 4/12/2017
This is so good!
RainStorm2122 chapter 22 . 3/27/2017
You should TOTALLY have turn over of the Grigori, revolt of the Order, or something(!) so that Angel is -run my thumb across my throat-. With the change for equality/acceptance Angel's continued repulsion of demons to the point where he goes on the attack he's imprisoned/executed. This needs to be thing, this needs to be the end of DOF!

You already know what else I want since I commented as I proof-read this chapter. ;-) Thanks for that, that was fun! I'm quite literally the first one to tell you what I want in that case. XD

The Order needs to either band together, or two members of the Grigori need to keel over.

Still love the update, and yes, Kito is going to have to put up with his Uncles' shenanigans! He's going to, in equal parts, love it and hate it. XD

Jyane~ Scar, I love you, you silly goose.
Panda Master X chapter 22 . 3/26/2017
Oh...My...GOODNESS! XD S-She left?! Resigned?! This can't beeee! Scarrrrrleeeeett! My heart hurts lol... But hey, at least Nir and Yasuo are progressing and Rin, Owen, and Neko are doing well
Guest chapter 21 . 2/23/2017
It's getting good. The only negative I have is that I feel like the main couple isn't getting enough time in the chapters. The OCs are taking over and overstepping a little much. I can deal with Yori and Scarlett, but when you add too many OCs, it doesn't feel like the actual anime/manga itself. Instead it's like a completely different story that just happens to have a few of the actual characters in it. Aside from that it's a good story. Just try to make sure you don't overshadow the main couple to the point that you stray too far
KisunaFuji chapter 21 . 1/1/2017
oh my.. I only found this fic today and I love it sooo much. your pairings are soo cute -
MidnightRide129 chapter 21 . 10/9/2016
I love this so much! Rin x Nekoyoma, Mephy x Griffin, Yukio x Yori, Yasuo x NIR, sooooooo cuuuuute! I love all the pairings in this story! Best story ever! Please update, because this is the best fanfic ever! When is Rin going to have the baby? What are they going to name it? Will Nir and Yasuo work everything out? Will Yukio and Yori get a kid? Is Shima gonna get a demon mate? That would be awesome! Anyway, please update this when u can, because I really want to know what happens!
RainStorm2122 chapter 21 . 7/23/2016
Yay! Owen took to Rin, and is on his way to a happy life! Mephy managed to sweep Griffin away! Wonder how Nori is gonna handle the kid, lol. XD

Nir has it rough Yasuo needs to fucking help him. And Scarlett needs a nap ASAP!

Have I ever mentioned how much I hate Angel? Cause I want to watch pretty boy burn.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/18/2016
MA content can't be argued against. It's a rule that has existed since 2002 (when it was purged from the site) and was purged again in 2012 by site admins. They don't want it here. Just because you see others do it, doesn't mean you should. It really depends on how much you detail though. If you describe fore play or penetration that is an automatic MA rating according to the admins (I know someone who once had foreplay only on the breasts and the story was removed by them.). If you keep it implied or a non-descriptive moment it should be fine.

You can have a self insert, you just can't let anybody know it's you. The name is a dead give away, and I'm assuming the Guest told you to change it for precaution. If you revealed that the OC is you, then I suggest you remove any evidence that states so cause it can be used against you in reports.

Author Notes/Polls. Non-story chapters is not allowed on the site. No ifs, ands or buts about it. You cannot have a "chapter" that is just an author's note. The archives are for stories, they are not your personal message board. If you want to let people know about something, post it to your fucking profile you dunce.

As for the polls, I think the Guest is referring to some of the stories on here that don't use the Poll system on FFN. Some idiots would do a poll in the reviews rather than use the function which is not allowed. I don't know whether it is because they don't know the Poll function exists, or if they do it for the Guest readers who cannot vote. Either way, using the poll system inside the story rather than on the profile is a NO, despite what reasons you have. If you have any Guest readers giving their vote by review, I suggest deleting them.

As said with the other points, it doesn't matter what your reasons are. They are STILL NOT ALLOWED. You are allowing the readers to take part in choosing the stories route which is interactive. You are not allowed to do that. If you want to continue doing that then you are going to have to be more secretive. Either have them give suggestions via a Forum or via your PM. You can then attach an TINY author note to your story content telling readers that you have a poll up on some ideas for the next chapter.

It's not all that hard to think about. People like you who try to weasel out of the rules are annoying. At least you are more respectable to the people who warn you rather than the idiots who throw a giant tantrum and have their readers attack them.

Just edit the story to fit it more within the Guideline Rules. Then you won't have any problems. If you need help, I suggest talking to one of the Report Groups. Critics United, Eliminator, Literate Union. They have studied the rules and ways to get around them. Some members have even suffered from stories being deleted out of no where. They are worth talking to. Especially if you want to keep your story here.

While you are there, take a look at their Worst Response threads just to see those authors I was talking about throw a fit all because of rule violations.
Panda Master X chapter 21 . 7/18/2016
OMG OMG OMG! SO EXCITING! I cant believe they're gonna go to war. Dx and Owen is so adorable! Aghhhh... I cant handle the cuteness. LOL
Guest chapter 13 . 5/14/2016
I would suggest renaming your character Scarlett. It can be viewed as a self insert and could get your reported for such under the rule of "Real People" (4 on the Entries Not Allowed list). As long as you didn't confirm anything in author notes or profile proclaiming the OC as you, you might be safe... but it's still a little risky. No offense. I won't report you for this, but I know others who could and do.

I'm just worried that the name being shared could be viewed as such and if you do have evidence pointing to an obvious self insert... I can't help you there. (I would suggest removing the evidence and changing the name in case. Or just the spelling of the name.)
Guest chapter 21 . 5/14/2016
Also reported for Non-story content. Please remember that not only is Interactive entries not allowed on this site, but Non-story chapters too.

Entries Not Allowed: 1. Non-stories: list, bloopers, POLLS, previews, challenges, AUTHOR NOTES, etc.

Remove all your author notes as well. They have already been sent to the admins as both evidence of the interactive contents and the non-story one as well. Also, MA content is not allowed. If I discover an explicit sex scene while exploring this, that is just another offense to report.

Remember, the M rating can only imply or give a non-descriptive moment for the suggested scene. MA is the full on details of both oral and penetration. You can't describe the foreplay nor the actual act itself. I know it sucks for some, but that is the site's choice. There are plenty of other sites for the explicit bits.

Again, you have been reported.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
Congratulations, your story has now been reported for Interactive Entry. As you should know, FFN does not permits interactive stories. (Entries Not Allowed: 5. Interactive entries; choose your adventure, Second Person/You based, Q&As, and etc) Meaning, stories that have the readers participating with the stories development is considered interactive, thus not allowed.

Your story has been reported for this action. All your reviews that have given you ideas will be used as evidence in the case, as well as your own author notes and polls. Do not be fooled by reviewers who are foolish enough to think the admins won't act. They actually have removed stories for less, and won't hesitate to remove this one once they get around to it. (They are pretty slow, so it gives you time to correct your error.)

I would suggest you stop taking any more reader's ideas, and use your own from now on. The readers can give you TINY suggestions on what they'd like to see happen, but you'll have to change the suggestion to an idea of your own. In other words, the readers no longer can dictate the flow of the story.

If you do not like the rules of the site, you can just as easily move the story over to a site that allows Interactive Entries such as Wattpad or Archive of Our Own. Or perhaps Tumblr. Either way, FFN does not permit such entries.

You can also risk choose to risk yourself with the admins. But from what I have seen, not only does your story risk the inevitable removal from the archive for it's violation, but also your account could be lost to their wrath. I've seen accounts removed for MA content, Copyright Infringement, and far other things. The admins are strict with their rules, especially now after the Purge of 2012.

(Basically, they've been a little more quicker in reports when they aren't working on the site (though sometimes still are slow), and been holding mini-purges every month to keep up with violations. Summer is going to be interesting again.)

Though I do not wish to do so, I have reported you already. I will continue to do so until the story fits to the Rules you agreed to when you joined, and again, before posting. I know it may not be favorable to you, or to you readers, but you broke the rule. You got caught, and now must deal with the consequences when they befall you. No amount of "But other people do it", or "This is bull, go after someone else. There are far worse who get away with it." is a proper excuse for your actions. You know this, and everyone should know that just because others have gotten away with it at the moment doesn't mean they won't go unscathed in the future. It's likely that the admins have not been alerted to them yet or have gotten around to them yet.

Besides, if you don't like a rule here nothing is stopping you from moving your work to another site more favorable to your needs. That's what many RESPONSIBLE writers do. They don't complain. They certainly have more maturity then some readers I know who rather whine and throw a fit over innocent people just doing what the admins requested of their users and guests. (Help report story violations.)

I know, I sound like I'm giving a lecture. It's not really directed at you in case you understand this and are willing to actually fix the mistakes. Its more directed at the readers who'll throw a fit and try to attack others just for pointing out a fact and trying to save the author from even more trouble. I mean, do you want to risk losing your story or account? No. Then the readers should know better than to force you to continue doing something they know is wrong just for their own gain. It's not right, and will only hurt the author in the end. But if you agree with some of those readers and most likely are the type to throw a hissy fit about such things, then the lecture involves you too.

Well, you've been reported. I hope you take responsibility and will fix this. It would be a shame for it to go just because of the interactive bits. Just remove it, and do your own ideas instead based on TINY suggestions than full on reader dictate, and it should be fine. No harm. Or move it or lose it. Three options to choose. I hope you pick one of the first two.
TheCauldron chapter 20 . 5/3/2016
Really enjoying this, and waited until the end of what's posted to ask a couple of questions... My first is: neko originally claimed to be rins mate to keep him there. All very clear. Along the way they fell in love over an improbably short period of time, and now they really are mates? Everyone else recognised their mates almost on sight. Why didn't run and neko? When did it change from pretending, to "yes this is a real thing"?

I'm sure I had another question, but I can't remember it right now. Either way, great story and I look forward to more!
Ticking.Toby chapter 20 . 4/11/2016
Nekoyoma should definitely adopt own! well, Nekoyoma and Rin
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