Reviews for Rude Awakening
The Mome Raths Outgrabe chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Awesome story very heartfelt.
mb64 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Oh so very good!

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myapplemonkey chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
awe, that was really sweet, and I love how they both knew the other would make fun of them for being kind of girly in other circumstances, but they just didn't care. and they're so close! :D I love that, especially. :) loved it, as always. :3
Mindy chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Brilliant story! This is probably one of the best ones I've read so far that deals with the issue of Dean finding out about Sam coughing up blood. Though personally, I think it will probably take Sam getting injured somehow on a hunt for the truth to come out. Maybe in next week's episode something will happen so Dean will find out. Also, I really love your theory that Cas wouldn't be able to help heal Sam of any afflictions related to the trials. Honestly, I wouldn't be at all surprised if something like that were to actually happen in the show. Given that the spell Sam recited at the end of the trial was in enchocian and we don't actually have it translated yet, I'd say something like that is highly likely.
deanssammy chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Omg. Love it. Sad,beautiful story ,poor sam.
TheButterflyCurse996 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Awesome story, thanks.
dashipper chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Awwwwww...the angst! I could feel the emotions from both Dean and Sam. I hope that they will play out something like this on the show. Thanks for sharing : )
goldfishie1 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Sammy! My poor muffin. I want to hug him so much. And awesome big brother Dean!
AshleyMarie84 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Now THIS is what I would kill to see on the show!

I love how you intertwined Dean's dream with reality. Very clever way to get him to realize not all is well with Sam. As always you write Dean taking care of Sam beautifully!
ed0dbfam chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
hhaha i always wait until you post something new and you please me every time! i love your stories... keep 'em coming! ;)

p.s. hope you're doing well and all's good at your end! :D
Yellowbulma chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I would love this to happen when Dean finds out in the show but I won't hold my breath! XD
SayLo chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Thank you for writing and sharing, it was an awesome one! As always from you it is all golden.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
elektra56765: It is wonderfully written :) I'd actually love to see that in the show!
SayLo chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Thanks for
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I think I screamed 'Yahoo' outloud when I say you'd posted a story! Especially this subject matter: Such grand opportunity to showcase the brother's love for one another.

You wrote: He licked the whipped cream off the fork he held and smiled around his mouthful of pie as he watched her dance just for him.
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Loved Dean's dream. And the fact that he had the dream so many times he knew it inside and out and it was freaky how you wrote it...in that derranged way...the girl taking on Sam's voice and bleeding from the mouth...that was awesome!

As you wrote: Because only his brother coughed like that, especially these days; that deep, chest-rattling cough that had first developed when Sam had been sick with a cold a few weeks ago and had stubbornly lingered ever since.

That cough that was apparently so ingrained in their lives now that it followed Dean down into his dreams.
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Again...so cool how you have Dean's sub-conscience know full-well what is going on come out in his dream! Creative thinking!

You wrote: Dean sighed. "Ah, Sammy..."

"I know," Sam gasped, the two words almost a sob. "M'sorry."

"Shut up," Dean told his brother with no heat in his words.

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So brotherly. Sam is seeking Dean's approval and care and Dean is handing it over on a silver platter. No fuss...no muss...just brother supporting brother.

Best line award:: "I can," Sam stubbornly vowed about seeing that light. "And I'm gonna take you to it. I promise. But...but I can't take you to it if you leave me before we get there."

I adore Dean for letting Sam do this! For trusting him! Even though he/Dean is scared to death for his brother. Guh!

Sam cuddling up to Dean and Dean allowing that as well... and not being angry and knowing he would play it all the same way...totally getting it...just guh! Want to see some brotherly cuddling like this on the show!

Fantastic work per always!
Thank you so much for writing this!
Karen
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