Reviews for Bell Whitlock
Princess Mishawaka chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Bella is really bad ass and she can take down the Cullens while she is human.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
The Cullens are still stupid. They don't give Jasper the respect they should and when the Major comes out they will see that only Bella can save them
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
The Cullens are not good people. They would have gotten rid of Bella.

Jasper has his mate and she loves him too.
xxxflobreeziexxx chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
I love it , its very well written. and I like the plot.
Kilataia chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Great story! I love possessive Jasper ! Yum!
polly2010 chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter!
polly2010 chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
The Cullens are a bunch of idiots lol
polly2010 chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
Great chapter!
polly2010 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Nice start!
Anna Juggernaut chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
exciting! please continue
JynxxD chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes :)
dolhpin33 chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Love it, can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
kimandjackKickinit chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Like it
kelly232 chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
I love this story - especially Bella, she can be bad ass but she knows her place with the major. Who wouldn't love this story. Please update soon
AbbeNormal chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Well, well...well. I see I am in love with a new story! Holy cow, I adore it! I love a story that makes the Cullens look like assholes, and also makes them look dumber then a box of rocks. So, right there, you had me. I can't wait to see if you have little malice killed off...throw eddie in there, and its almost like Christmas. lol

You are doing great. I can't wait to see where you take us on this journey. Keep up the awesome job!

Mary :o)
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