|Reviews for Valentine's Day|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
Ooc much?(I mean all that romance? Just MUSH) and Sabrina, and Jewelry? Ya. Not happening. but other wise, funny(he he, he didn't know the tooth past is in the bathroom. How dum can you get?! But still, halaryis!)
| SkyePenderwick chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Anybody adopted it cause I really want to read it?!
| lilcarellijohn chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Ahh loved it write more
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
| Cupcakelover chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I loved this chapter! I think it will turn out as a GREAT story! But you should up having PUCKABRINA! It would be cute! Well thanks... Keep on writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
| sanderine chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Very good,veeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyy good.
Btw should make this a story
I like the way you called puck a jealous monkey
| Cinder Lunar chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
thanks. your awesome to.
| Curlscat chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I went into this thinking it was going to be kind of cliche, and it was, but it was also quite cute. I liked that they didn't get together at the end, I liked Puck and Sabrina's argument, I think Peter is a bit too romantic and fond of Pink for Sabrina, and I thought everybody had great interactions.
One thing, though: your punctuation needs help, particularly at the end of sentences. You drop a lot of ending periods in dialogue.