Once again, wonderful piece! I especially liked how you wrote Ada in this one; how she decided to be human in the end because of Leon. And I love your idea of what could've happened! It was extremely plausible and realistic. Once again, your writing style is stunning and it just flowed! Characterization of Ada and Steve was on the dot too. D'aww... I loved the short but sweet interaction between them, by the way. I can totally see it! _

And hooray for using one of my favorite songs at the end! 8D Awesome job!

Kenzie

Wah...this is so good..steve is alive! yeah!..now that RE4 had long come out you can right a sequel.

(You hear a taunting voice in the back of your head)

~Do it~

~Do it~

Hehe. xD

That was incredible! A very original idea and the characterisation was spot on.

Wow! You are an amazing writer! You were recomended to me by a friend and i'm glad she did. honestly if your not writing for a living you should! You've got talent girl!

your story is very very good I love it when Steve came back on it , when I saw Steve Burnside die it made me cry for hours I had to stop playing for a one day because I was so upset about. Why did he have to die I thought Claire and Steve would be together at the end of RECVX, But no capcom have to go kill and with nothing on, so please write a story follewing up after this one and please let Claire and Steve be together in it at the end.

Ach! Ada, why! You crazy bastard. And now Steve's alive. I hate steve!

GREAT! SEQUEL! PLEASE!

(god, I loved it so much I can't even talk normally anymore...)

A sequel starring Leon and the Redfields in addition to Ada and Steve would be awesome!

Love it love it love it love it!

Wow this was cool! Sequel, sequel I say! And you're right Steve shouldn't have died! It's not fair! Everyone had to listen to me rant for two days when I came to the part where Steve died about how unfair it was! I loved Steve, he was a hottie. _ And I cried my eyes out when he died, and I never cry during videogames (well except for the end of FF9). Why must all the good looking, cool charectors either be evil or die? Heh heh anyway write some more! I wanna know what's goin on.

I've gotta say, the best peice of writing I've read on fanfiction! Reading this one story was fantastic... never before have I read anything so gripping and heartfelt. You have the effect to blow me away just like S. D. Perry! Oh, and about that sequel... DO IT! ;o) Feel free to e-mail me.

hell yeah

Okay, this is one of the first fics I've read that actually made me cry... You're a great writer and I'm so happy you did a fic with both Ada and Steve in it (they don't get the recognition they deserve)!

You know I said about you being talented. Screw talented. You're a GENIUS!

This was an excellent written story! Well done! I really enjoyed reading this one, so keep up the good work. On another note, the woman in red is actually Claire, and D.I.J is actually a rat! Yeh I know, how could a rat write a diary? Well, ask Capcom! Anyhow, you should write lots more RE stories. Keep writing them, and I'll keep reading them.