|Reviews for The Fool|
| Rochir chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Ho-o-o-o-o...who said there's no use for a back seat in a 2-door car?
| unedune chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
really liked that chapter -just on my way to work - so always nice to start off the day with a good story -
| Sophies-Welt chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Awesome! Please another chapter! I'd like to know how it continues!
| Talldi chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Gee I like this story! A very quick look into what it was, what fun! di
| ocwi chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
dear GE ...your writing shows great promise...be your own critic, be certain of the language technicalities , the characters personal qualities and the plots..you will do very well. This old creative writing instructor is impressed.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Can you really leave it at that?
So emotional. Would like to see more.
| AbbyGibbs chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I really love this first one shot of yours and I really hope it won't be your last!
I love their first kiss laced in alcohol.
Great fic, thanks for writing and sharing it.
| KoteDiM chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
You know I always like your stuff - this is no exception.
Great oneshot. Loved the descriptions of their eyes - I could practically see them. Wonderfully loaded with emotions
| mdp2512 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Could you not be tempted into some further chapters?
| Jacqueline Waugh chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
| Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Awww awesome cute...how about a second chapter?