|Reviews for I might need to be near you|
| narutogoldylocks chapter 7 . 6/26
This fanfic is SO cute ahhhhhh ** I really like your idea of how Jim and Melody meet, and how Jim comes to Earth in the first place. You write them both well. Jim is sooo funny and cheeky; I love him. And Melody resenting her royal duties is very realistic.
I look forward to the next chapter! -
| susann chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
Wow! Your writing style is really creative and cute. luv it!
| Rosita chapter 7 . 7/12/2013
Pleasssse continue ! :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
Amazing! I just adore this story! Please continue!
| anon chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
| Heidi Walters chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
This is amazing! you have connected the two stories and characters flawlessly! excellent writing style !
I impatiently look forward to the next update!
| outofusernames12 chapter 6 . 6/10/2013
THIS IS SOOO GOOD! Please do continue! love your writing style!
| anon chapter 6 . 5/16/2013
This was very sweet
| Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
Wow... Um... why can't they let the 'Earthlings' see B.E.N or Morph?
| Ribon95 chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
yay, u uploaded here as well! :D fav following
| the Mirage Prismatic chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
this is really interesting - I've heard of Jim/Ariel but never Melody and Jim and it sounds like a better pairing to me. But I disgress. The story is really intriguing - the idea that Jim's people actually do come from Earth and those who remain have slower technological progress makes good sense to me.
(Though at first, I thought it took place before the events of Melody's movie.)
And, I would recommend putting breaks between Jim and Melody's sections. looking forward to the next part!