|Reviews for Fate: Heaven's Works|
| YuNaru19 chapter 10 . 10/3
It sounds like Assassin is Jack the Ripper
| Mas2009 chapter 10 . 9/5
damn it you don't finish the action when necessary specially the fights and you stall a lot damn it, a better shirou here but too many cuts in the plot
| Reishin Amara chapter 9 . 8/11
aw man,even the wheel chair girl from Yggdmillennia died?darn...
| Geremonie chapter 7 . 8/7
I Love It! :)
| Hercules8 chapter 3 . 8/2
I'm loving powerful Shirou! Please continue this story, it's really good! :D
| Hercules8 chapter 2 . 8/2
| Hercules8 chapter 1 . 8/2
Sooo AWESOME! I saw some weapons in this chapter that sound very familiar. I can't wait to read more! :3
| Iskandar06 chapter 10 . 7/30
Why dont you update this fic?
| Raegys Targaryen chapter 1 . 7/10
I was hoping for the multiple sabers like before. Now I'm a little disappointed.
| Unkillable chapter 10 . 7/1
I know this appears to be on permanent hiatus and all but...
Sad that the story won't update, but...Who cares. It was good while it lasted.
| shadow'sdawn chapter 10 . 5/31
You haven't updated this since 2014 but I have enjoyed the story so I'll leave a review.
I have really enjoyed the story so far, repetitive since I said it before but I wasn't sure how else to start this review.
I like the twists you have placed on this story as well as your efforts to give us focus on the character to fully understand their motivation. It helps add depth to a story we have seen/read many times. Also one element that stood out for me was the pacing of your writing. The best example I can think of is the reveal of who caster was. Slow subtle hints that built up and up to give a clearer picture. I loved it!
There might be a few things I could point out as bad but I personally consider them nitpicks and more to do with my own perception than your writing style. So all in all while there are a few, very minor, elements I don't like overall I have enjoyed reading the story. If you ever update I'll be back to read it again :)
| Pedro52 chapter 2 . 5/16
| wolf10000 chapter 10 . 5/15
This chapter was great please update soon
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/15
Can't wait for the next chapter
| GGFBank chapter 3 . 4/21
Gilgamesh-sama is just too awesome here lol