Reviews for Nightmare
Daniel Affaro chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
That was surprising that that person was the first death (ambiguous to avoid spoilers). Though it does beg the question where exactly they were killed. If it was just outside the starting place, then how did no one see them when coming out? Food for thought

Favourited and hoping for more :) really into this now
Daniel Affaro chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
I like that it leaves what's on the table ambiguous until the teacher comes in, but the sudden mood shift from horror to "oh she's joking" was a bit off

I was expecting them to be somewhere other than an island for the game as I feel that's been done to death in fics, but that's just me

I'm really liking the teacher and really want to get to know more about her and why she's doing this

As for who's dead either: Eva (Still my favourite so I really wish it wasn't) or girl #8 (the name escapes me). The two most logical; either the most vulnerable or the latest girl, as the guy was described as bruteish
Daniel Affaro chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Favourite character so far: Eva
I really like how she's headstrong and self-assured despite being blind. Though realistically she'd be one of the first to die... Shame :/

A good solid chapter, introducing some characters. As a matter of preference I would have preferred fewer characters and used the same amount of words to expand on them more, as right now people seem to be falling into cliches as opposed to being what they are: people. Like the nerds, how no one wants to be a nerd, the hot/popular guy who's a bit of a prick, the fat girl, the girl gang etc. I'm sure through more development they won't be the cliches I just described, but glancing over them provides an opportunity to fall into that trap.

Well written and I like the student number inclusion (given to my own) and the fact that the teacher is a WOMAN! Seriously haven't read a fic yet with a female one. Looking forward to see how that plays out.

The guy from Japan though... He almost screams Shogo Kawada; and I'd really hate if he was just a cookie cutter of him

Definitely reading more :)
Galahad Dragonbeam chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
You like Battle Royale too? Awesome.
I liked the first chapter. Very nice start, very reminiscent of the original Battle Royale. I thought the setup and explaination for later on was nice, what with the (Boy/Girl #) thing. Makes characters easier to keep track of later on.

My favourite character? Well, at this point, there's not really enough characterization for me to decide. However, I'm sure when I have the time to read the next few chapters, I'll be better able to decide.

-Avenger
Satir3 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
This is a good start.
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