|Reviews for Grey Clouds Loomed|
| Jatok chapter 9 . 6/28
Brilliant as all your stories, shade. Wish you had found more of a muse for this one though :)
| Eurigos chapter 9 . 11/8/2015
This is awesome
| marcus nightfire chapter 9 . 7/28/2015
Os this story abandoned? It was really good
| PrometheusII chapter 9 . 1/28/2015
I like your plots, action, dialogue etc much more than your writing style.
You take many things for granted, make large leaps, write in "mysterious" sounding sentences which are really difficult to follow - whereas the plot, the characterse, the ideas are really interesting!
And parts of your writing are "normal", clear. Like the end of this chapter, with Tonks. Or the dialogues with Susan etc. I do not really understand why other parts are written in this confusing/confused? style..
It was similiar with the Chronicles of the King...
| Chim Cheree chapter 9 . 12/10/2014
great story. It's not often Harry is characterized this ruthless and without morals and empathy, even in other vampire Harry stories. Do you plan on updating this story again?
| T51b Moridin chapter 9 . 11/14/2014
Always good to get rid of enemies in short order. Wow what a chapter. As he falls further into the sin and evil of apathy of which vampires are bred on. The nevrr ending night which crushes their souls. I look forward to this in the future. Great story.
| T51b Moridin chapter 8 . 11/14/2014
Ah so susan will be sold? Er wait he said he was keeping his blood dolls so any he chooses are to be kept. Poor daphne hahahahaha. To be a nursery at such a young age.
| T51b Moridin chapter 7 . 11/14/2014
I forgot how to get ur humanity back if it drops. Always difficult. One more point and he is close to beast. I would love to see him somehow regain his humanity if only for the sake of appearing human. Imagine gaining ur soul back hljust so you could hide in plain sight. Priceless.
| T51b Moridin chapter 6 . 11/14/2014
Lowers the generation by making lower level vamps in charge able to feed on animal and human blood.
| T51b Moridin chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
So i wonder if a vampire were to devour a king or older vampire would they then be considered that position and gain all said beings power? How curious.
| T51b Moridin chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
Sad really. Its like the habit becomes the person instead of a person making or breaking the habit.
| T51b Moridin chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
In other words by devouring vampires a vampire can gain in statud and power quicker than waiting for time to pass.
| T51b Moridin chapter 2 . 11/14/2014
Chuckles. Harry should still have magic of the wizard kind as he is indeed originally a wizard so his magical core should be intact since he didnt die per say.
| T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Odd so ebtire canon cast is older than gwl. Meaning they never became friends and all that.
| Anarade Relle chapter 9 . 4/6/2014
How dismal a fate. . .