Reviews for Just a Girl
Crazy chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
I can't read this fic. It's all one big paragraph, and it's giving me a headache. Please use the enter key more often.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
This is really good! I wish you'd continue! Could it possibly turn out to be a romance with a ranger?
Seriya Silvermist chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
This is good so far I'd like to see where this is going please update
AwsomeWierdo chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
I like your story, but please! make them longer!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
Good please update!
angel14108 chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
This sounds like it's going to be really interesting and I can't wait for an update!
Savannah Silverstone chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Great chapter and the plot interests me ! Remember split up your chapter into paragraphs . The narration can be more descriptive too . Update soon
Mezzem313 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Well, that was interesting.
Savannah Silverstone chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Well...I haven't read enough about the story to actually judge it. You can make the chapters longer! That would help! Also...
New topic/New person talking New paragraph
If you squish it all together, it can kinda make the reader dizzy so...

Anyway Other than thatI'd love to learn more about the girl and the ranger-.
Dash99 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I think this is going to be good! Can't wait for more! Please update!