It's 2020! This still hasn't been finished! Gosh darn it, I was really looking forward to an ending. Though it was years ago, congrats on your medal in tennis. Hope things are going well :)

Great story! Thank you!

Awwwwww ;D finallyyyyyyyyyy! I see this hasn't been updated in a while, but... Pleaseeeee pleaseeeeee pleaseeeeee continue!

You know that would be exactly what Ranka would do. Grab something like a back scratcher and then realize it was useless!

*cries for misinterpreted lines*

Lol I am so glad you opted for a non-sick Haruhi. And yay! Kyoya and Haruhi are perfect together. I can't wait for the next chapter!

LOL I love the force medicine deal! That would be an interesting way to have a first kiss for sure.

D'awww. Yay! Finally things are going to be okay! Le sigh... I hope you came up with a "It wasn't Leukemia after all. It was actually _ ."

You shouldn't let Haruhi's illness just be some mysterious "oh look it disappeared" type thing. IRL one would never have a "OMG you might have cancer...uh,nope JK it's nothing." It'd just be something else with similar symptoms... Blood problems, eh? Fatigue issues, weakness? Anemia, perhaps?

BTW. "Observative" is not a truly English word (kind of like "Conversate"). The proper term is "observant."

There's still weird grammatical and formatting issues (handling quotes, run on sentences, and long paragraphs that really should be separated into multiple paragraphs) ongoing. I still suggest a beta to revise this story or for future stories.

You have good plot ideas, and some decent story-telling skills. You just need assistance in polishing it up.

Woot! Thanks for the update!

Yay! Finally! I am glad they are being honest with their feelings for each other.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEASE CONTINUE! I MUST know what happens next!

...wow. Um. Hi. It's been a while. I think you killed me with this chapter. Feels. I love it :D

great chapter update soon

great chapter update soon please