|Reviews for Cold Equation|
| Dollar Short chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Rummaging around and stumbled across this. Great piece. I think your writing changes a little in style when it comes to the dialogue but I think your description of Sam, his state of mind and his cold trudge across the snow are wonderful and evocative. There's a lovely melancholy but practical slant to Sam's angst, which is how I always see him.
'His vocabulary has become almost completely attenuated to saying "yes" or "no" to Dean, on the rare occasions that Dean asks him anything. Sometimes, even saying "yes" leaves a bad taste in his mouth, although he has no idea why.' Perfect.
| RainbowBetty chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Oh poor Sam! I just loved this. So well done! Your description of Sam giving in to the cold was chilling and heartbreaking!