Reviews for Twins' Brains, Snape's Gains, Umbridge's Pains
Amarenima Redwood chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
GuidingHand chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Amusing. :)
Montley chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Ah, this was hilarious! I knew the second I saw the title that I was going to enjoy this story, and I very much did!
Poor Snape, but I love those twins so much, and you did them perfect justice here!
Such an enjoyable story!
Great work!
Nicole Riordan Rowling chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Love it!
Magsforever chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I liked this a lot, there were a few points web it was weirdly worded but other than that it wa awesome
Lily meet Ginny chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Overall, this is pretty good. I'm interested to see what else the twins get into. One segment is a bit off though:
A screech was heard from the dungeons, from the resident Potions Maker's quarters specifically, in the early hours of the morning. It was high, and sounded like a woman's screech.

The segment has too many commas- it doesn't read smoothly. Also, you have screech at the beginning and the end. It would read better if the screeching and the description were combined.

I could definitely see Fred and George creating and executing this prank. Great job utilizing the prompts.