Reviews for Betrayal
OkBoomer147 chapter 5 . 6/11
that was suprisingly good!
great work mate!
X4n3 chapter 5 . 5/8
This was a great little fic.
Hitmen101 chapter 1 . 2/8
Thanks for the story! :D :)
CarolWim chapter 5 . 1/25
Wow. I read this before, but it still one word to describe this amazing story: wow!
Heir of Cthulhu chapter 5 . 11/13/2022
Loved it.
Darknessdawns chapter 5 . 10/22/2022
Now this was a fascinating piece. I generally don't care for stories told from various view points, but there was something about the way this one was done. I am off way I kind of liked that view of Harry from the outside of his character. I honestly think my favorite point of view was Daphne's. Overall I enjoyed the story though I have to agree the chapters do seem like snippets from a larger piece. Personally I would have enjoyed reading a section from Harry's point of view or another from Daphne, particularly after the epilogue. I'm very curious to know where things go from here and how they finally destroy Voldemort for good. I'm honestly a bit surprised that Harry had't figured anything out after 4 years. However I'm rather sure Daphne could help him with that.
a.vago chapter 5 . 7/16/2022
Interesting story!
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!
jules3677 chapter 5 . 7/15/2022
Powerful story. Using different POV’s gave more emotion to the characters. Impressed you didn’t hold back on the devastation and desolation experienced in war. Thank you.
Jorge A Rodriguez chapter 5 . 3/23/2022
The story is well conceived and very well written. You have the makings of a master writer- thank you for publishing.
Shortsharpshock chapter 5 . 3/3/2022
Good story. Thanks.
Bostonette chapter 5 . 2/26/2022
Finally, a well written little story with a great Harry Potter character and actions to go with his evolved personality. Shame stories like this are almost non existent in this fandom.
Brezer chapter 1 . 11/8/2021
good short, would be nice if their was more.
Jorge A Rodriguez chapter 3 . 10/19/2021
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