that was suprisingly good!
great work mate!

This was a great little fic.

Thanks for the story! :D :)

Wow. I read this before, but it still one word to describe this amazing story: wow!

Loved it.

Now this was a fascinating piece. I generally don't care for stories told from various view points, but there was something about the way this one was done. I am off way I kind of liked that view of Harry from the outside of his character. I honestly think my favorite point of view was Daphne's. Overall I enjoyed the story though I have to agree the chapters do seem like snippets from a larger piece. Personally I would have enjoyed reading a section from Harry's point of view or another from Daphne, particularly after the epilogue. I'm very curious to know where things go from here and how they finally destroy Voldemort for good. I'm honestly a bit surprised that Harry had't figured anything out after 4 years. However I'm rather sure Daphne could help him with that.

Interesting story!
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!

Powerful story. Using different POV’s gave more emotion to the characters. Impressed you didn’t hold back on the devastation and desolation experienced in war. Thank you.

The story is well conceived and very well written. You have the makings of a master writer- thank you for publishing.

Good story. Thanks.

Finally, a well written little story with a great Harry Potter character and actions to go with his evolved personality. Shame stories like this are almost non existent in this fandom.

good short, would be nice if their was more.

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nice

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