Reviews for Project GUARDIAN: The Rise & Fall
PrincessPookie2016 chapter 56 . 12/27/2017
I love this story, I was hooked on it for like a week, amd then I told myslef "okay, calm down the stories going no where". so I took a break for a few weeks, and just two days ago I was on chapter 34 and now I'm done with story. I'm both happy and dad at the same time, I love the ending so much. (btw in real life I would be like Dean in the story when he beted on Tooth and Jack).
Shambel chapter 35 . 11/29/2017
Oh my god ok. I took a break from binge reading it. To come into the reviews to scream. 35chapters. I held out. For 35 chapters. And it was an awesome ride until here. And I am sure. It will continue to be awesome.
Like. Okay listen.
It makes sense. The way the characters are going through changes. And the way they are maturing and starting to depend on each other. It makes sense. Its not "urgh. I gotta protect her now" to "damn shes hot and I wanna bone her" suddenly. But it is graudally. And everything. Every new emotion, new feeling, ne thoughts... they all make sense and I just love fanfictions or stories in general, that make sense.
Apart from that.. THEY KISSED!
35 chapters! So much! Slow burn! And they kissed! I am very happy. It was a good decision to read it for 5hours straight instead of going to sleep!
I will leave another review when I finished it. Because damn. You sure deserve it.
zophtoko chapter 56 . 8/9/2017
THIS WAS THE MOST PERFECT FAN FIC I HAVE EVER READ BEFORE. THIS HAS COMEDY, FLUFF, SUSPENSE, ALOT OF ACTION, GREAT LIFE LESSONS, DEPRESSING AND ROMANTIC. I LOVE THIS. I WANT EMMA TO MEET TOOTH AND HER SISTERS. I ALSO WOULD THINK THAT A FANFIC OF EVERYONE LIKE TOOTH'S FAMILY, EMMA, THE GUARDIANS, AND THE ELVES SHOULD ALL GET TOGETHER AND WATCH A SPAR PRACTICE BETWEEN JACK AND TOOTH, BUT LIKE SHOW HER USING THE SWORDS LIKE A BADASS AND HIM WITH HIS STAFF. OF THEIR FAMILY...ur au was so perfect. it's a REAL story and I loved it. kinda broke my heart to see it end but still. I adored it
zophtoko chapter 42 . 8/7/2017
I literally understood nothing of the Russian lines u used but I still had an idea of what they said! GREAT WORK. I only understood what they said in Spanish easily tho but u made it kinda clear with helping us understand what was said when the others spoke foreign languages I didn't speak
zophtoko chapter 33 . 8/6/2017
Even though this isn't real life , Ch. 33 COMPLETELY broke me
zophtoko chapter 30 . 8/6/2017
I'm waiting on her to finish "son of a...lol
zophtoko chapter 29 . 8/5/2017
what's weird is that idk if u mean to put it but I just realized a coincidence that Jack needs his memories and in ROTG movie and stories, tooth is the Guardian of Memories. Awesome
zophtoko chapter 28 . 8/5/2017
THE SURPRISES JUST KEEP COMING. ONE WORSER THEN THE LAST
zophtoko chapter 25 . 8/5/2017
wow... this is tooth's fault tbh. she simply could of told Jack the truth but she was too embarrassed
zophtoko chapter 20 . 8/5/2017
I never... wow this chapter... when u realize EVERYTHING isn't as it seems
zophtoko chapter 18 . 8/5/2017
NOOOOOOO! LMAOOOO SHE WAS SINGING DADDY YANKEE'S SONG GASOLINA. I LOVE THAT SONG, OLD CLASSIC
zophtoko chapter 14 . 8/5/2017
wow I feel like I'm on chapter. 30 but I'm only on 14. that shows how good u are as a writer
zophtoko chapter 14 . 8/5/2017
awe I she is worrying about him A lot, but sadly Jack doesn't want that, or doesn't know how to take that
zophtoko chapter 9 . 8/4/2017
IM PISSING MY PANTS! THIS IS SO HILARIOUS. TOOTH IS SO STRESSED AND CHIKDISH COMPARED TO JACKSE BROODISH PERSONE
zophtoko chapter 9 . 8/4/2017
"My God, I'm lodging with a convict whose got amnesia" lmaoo I love tooth and her sarcasm here. I like how u made her scared like any other person who was kidnapped and is travelling no with a wanted Jack but even if she is terrified she still stands her ground later on when she needs to against Jack I'm arguments. Also, I saw how he was checking her out discreetly. Well not really checking her out, more like giving her a nice glance over BUT still. and yes tooth is so right. Jack is attractive
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