Reviews for The Chosen One's Journey
Guest chapter 15 . 9/23/2023
Yeah, this is mid at best. Ash gets worse as time goes on. By the pokemon league he forgets all his strategy for most of his fights. Everything from using type advantaged moves to offset other moves, and blocking when you can't run, to using two moves at once for combination moves. He's arrogant and doesn't take advantage of any of his advantages, he panics and just doesn't respond to attacks against his pokemon half the time, and its REALLY INFURIATING. The whole entirety of the potential this work had was supposed to be a level headed ash who can strategize and the author takes that ability away more and more to make fights dramatic and interesting instead of making other trainers strategize. Its sad because this work is legitimately good, and then you feel like you get the rug pulled out from under you reading fights Ash should obviously be using strategies he had displayed before but he refuses to and the best excuse you get is 'he's testing the waters' like it doesn't make him stupid to just hold back on strategies and wait while his pokemon just get hit. In my opinion, this makes him a worse pokemon trainer because he's obviously capable of strategizing and he isn't developing or using any of it. I don't think you have to go super edgy everyone's killing eachother but damn, you COULD have your characters act like they want to win...
yowaddup5 chapter 23 . 8/22/2023
ah this really sucks this story was amazing and ash being op is cool I was looking forward to him battling in the new league
yowaddup5 chapter 6 . 8/22/2023
I love the training montage lmao
Deltared52952 chapter 13 . 8/17/2023
not as satisfying as the one vs three but pretty good
ScythH02 chapter 6 . 7/7/2023
A montage is typically a visual device in movies and TV shows. Here, in a written format, it's cringe at best lazy/bad writing at worst.
crimson dragon chapter 1 . 6/25/2023
its a good start for a great story man
Soraslove chapter 1 . 2/24/2023
I like this Ash.
Mizuki Nagasaki chapter 11 . 2/8/2023
Buffy the hunter
B3an3rz1 chapter 1 . 10/14/2022
this is very well executed. mu only feed
back was that it felt a little rushed maybe? just my personal opinion, nothing morestill kudos!
NamelessBastard7 chapter 6 . 10/11/2022
Zorua it’s actually from sinnoh I think, on that note I know gen 4 it’s the best gen but stop giving him more Pokémon from other regions it’s weird to see him get them and such op ones so early on
Serpent Moon chapter 2 . 6/13/2022
You wrote fairy type as well
dheeraj chapter 4 . 5/29/2022
i would like a strong steel type pokemon and the second should be a sudo legendory dragon type
Reader chapter 12 . 3/11/2022
Awesome movie chapter
Reader chapter 11 . 3/11/2022
Original gym leader battle was good
Ash with an Absol is cool
Awesome that Dragonite and Blastoise evolved
Ash vs Giovanni was great too
Reader chapter 10 . 3/11/2022
Awesome tournament
Ash vs AJ was great
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