Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 14 . 3/8
God. The big reveal just had to happen right then, didnt it? And I really wanna read a sex scene where Jack is actually awake...
Hey chapter 14 . 1/15
What the heck I love this story so please continue!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/9
"Uh, Ma'am? Jack literally just woke up- no one's had a chance to explain, yet."
Guest chapter 11 . 1/9
*snickers* I feel kind of awful for Bunny, really, and oddly amused by everyone else's fury. If he explains things properly, I can see Jack calling him a stubborn idiot but also probably not being half as upset about things as almost everyone in the story seems to expect. Bunny was truly that far gone, and Jack /saw/ how badly wrecked he was, so I don't see him being as angry about the bond as pissed off at Bunny for being stupid and letting himself get so bad- in the sense of how dangerously unhealthy Bunny was by then. Also annoyed about /yet another important thing/ that no one thought to teach him, in the case of the leaking-magic thing. Jack certainly enjoyed himself for all that he was terribly confused.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/9
*pats author's hand*
They're /Spirits/. Jack was literally dead before being turned into a Winter Spirit. Immortal teenager or not, ridiculous Pooka things or not, I'd call an utter lack of preggo-Jack perfectly logical. It'd be one thing if it was Bunny, or in a Pooka-Jack story, wherein it's a Pooka thing, but Jack was entirely human before becoming a Spirit and a dead one at that. A pregnant Jack would be /weird/.
And I totally agree with the author that m-preg is brainbreaking without a seriously good work around, which is not present in this 'verse without species-swapping at /minimum/. You (other readers) want a pregnant Jack so badly, let them find out Jack is actually a girl that died before growing proper boobs. I can't see it changing much (if any) of the story the movie gives us, at least. Well, bar even creepier-ness from Pitch if he noticed somehow...
Guest chapter 14 . 12/21/2016 shiz nit...
Guest chapter 14 . 12/19/2016
Please continue this!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
Kitty Kat Vixen chapter 14 . 10/6/2016
This is getting even more good! I can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 14 . 10/4/2016
Please, update snd finish this story.
amayranni22 chapter 14 . 8/23/2016
waaaaa more
pantaraz615 chapter 5 . 5/12/2016
what a waste it would be such a great mpreg to T-T
Guest chapter 14 . 3/27/2016
I know this story is old and you probably forgot about it but I really do hope that you find it and continue writing. I love the story line and I want to know what Mother Nature thinks of the forceful bonding.
Solo16 chapter 14 . 3/20/2016
Please update and continue! I would luv to see what happens next!
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 14 . 2/8/2016
Please please please continue? I really like this story and idea it has everything it needs and maybe maaaybe maaaaybe you'll continue after 3 years of not writing?
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