Reviews for Yellow Cream Cake
she.dreams.in.colour chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I can't really find words to aptly describe this fic. It's tagged as Romance/Humor and starts out in a quite 'fluffy' note and it makes one think she's reading a feel-good fic, but then the ending drops quite literally like a bomb and shatters that picture of sweet fluff, replacing it with a bitter, angsty picture of what one can arguably say is reality.

You send a very powerful message across, dear. Well done. :)
Plain Old Shahhida chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Twinkies... and Klaus?
Hot damn
AngelinaGuerin chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I loved your story! Very funny! But I don't think klaus would attack her for being silly and shoving cake in his face. I think he would tackle her and tickle her or something. Be amused! Laugh and flirt then kiss her.

Also it's the last box of Twinkies and he threw one away and she shoved one in his face lol. I expected Caroline to gasp and freak out that he threw the Twinkie in the trash lol. Haha at least I thought it would have been hilarious!

But cute story :)
lhie0807 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
the ending was kinda sad