Reviews for Cryptic Hush
Guest chapter 45 . 10/20/2014
I like it
iamgrell chapter 39 . 2/24/2014
Alright, I love angst as much as the next girl...perhaps a little more...but this is a bit overdone. You're pushing the line on "realistic things that could happen". Perhaps some people are actually as unlucky as depicted in this story, but it feels a bit soap-opera like. If that makes sense. This is just personal preference and something for you to think about.

I really want to see Loki apologising to Thor because he can now truly understand what it was like for him to find Loki after his attempt.
iamgrell chapter 26 . 2/23/2014
You are not a bad writer by any means. However, I feel that this story is a little rushed in some areas. For example, the relationship between Tony and Loki. It seems like they are going way to fast. I can deal with them getting together early on, but people don't become as serious as they are as quickly they did. It felt like you were trying to speed through the set up to get to the plot. I'm not sure if that's the case, but it would be an easy thing to do. If I were you,I would slow down and take my time setting the story up. I have faith in your writing skills and I believe that you can do it.

My other issues is how Tony came out. I'm not accusing you of anything, but it felt like the whole thing was dismissed as an almost non-factor. Coming out is a HUGE deal. No-one is as comfortable with it as Tony was, especially if they are JUST figuring out their orientation. Most people take a while to come to terms with being gay (or anything other than straight). I can certainly understand speeding the process up for the sake of the story, but this felt a bit too fast. Again, I have confidence that you will be able to easily overcome this problem, if you so choose.

As a positive, I'm very interested in where this story is going and exactly happened with Odin. I especially like the whole dream thing-it's a very creative medium to use in this case. Keep writing!
FMAluvr1 chapter 45 . 2/22/2014
TTATT How beautiful. I started reading this yesterday and didn't stop until I was finished. Thanks to you, I am officially a shipper of Ironfrost(or frostiron).
By chapter 28, I was like, "fuck already!" But I'm glad they waited. I nearly cried when Tony tried to kill himself.
GlOmP3R chapter 45 . 2/8/2014
Awwh, loved this ! Kickass job(: please , please, tell me there is a sequel !? Awesome work, I honestly loved this !
pallyndrome chapter 45 . 12/5/2013
Great story! :)
GoddessonmyKnees chapter 45 . 11/26/2013
Great story. They were so sweet and romantic. The sex scene was hot.

Thank you.
SophiaGrey chapter 18 . 10/10/2013
This story is so sweet. I keep picturing these two boys who are young but have already had such long lives, I think they are beautiful together in this story!
SophiaGrey chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
I love this story so far! I am excited to keep reading. I also enjoy your end comments, too funny!
helloooo chapter 45 . 9/26/2013
Please make a sequel! There's to little frostiron high school au and I might melt because of it :)
Guest chapter 45 . 8/4/2013
Asdfghjklove chapter 45 . 7/26/2013
Holy shit this is probably my favorite FrostIron fic of all time. I'm literally going to be a missionary of this fic and tell everyone I know to go read this. Excuse me while I go read everything else you have written.
Love and dead fish,
PurpleRageMonster chapter 45 . 7/24/2013
Awwwww! AWESOME STORY! Loved it! Like a lot a lot and can't wait to read your other stories :D
Frostironman chapter 45 . 7/24/2013
I take it back, that was more embarrassing to read xD

I LOVE this story, you did a great job with a wonderful and happy ending! 33
xXxStarrxXx chapter 45 . 7/24/2013
Interesting I'd feel funny talking about my sex life in front of friends and over protective big brothers. I'm surprised Thor hadn't pulled Tony to the side for another chat. Thor had no right tell Loki's business. Plus my friends asking how it was makes it a bit creepy. I enjoyed the fic I thought Odin would make another appearance but no such luck. Great story. Can I get a summary of the next fic?
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