Reviews for To End it All
Ariadne Venegas chapter 25 . 4/14
I really like your series!
Even if Nico was hanged into heterosexual, I love Luna and in someway they clicked ok he could had blessed them and then they will have more demigod powers... Maybe he will do it anyway now that the war will come, the good thing is that Harry and company are not old so they can fight in the war, at least Harry to help to keep his kids safe, the ones fighting, Piper will get to protect the little ones with Anabeth while Percy and Harry go to war they are not older than 35 and look and feel like 25 for what Zeus blessed them, so they totally could go and fight with their kids.
aquarius89 chapter 25 . 6/9/2015
I loved all four of your stories, I hope you start on there children's stories soon! I can't wait and iI hope Draco and Drew pop up in them! cool stories! :)
Shadowsmage chapter 5 . 9/2/2014
Not a surprise, Jason is an idiot and is going to get himself killed
Mari Wollsch chapter 25 . 8/8/2014
sreat, i loved this series xxxxxxxxxxx
rmbell811 chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Great job! I hope you post the new series about Kayden and the Heros soon!
CrimsonHeresy chapter 25 . 4/29/2014
This was a awesome series and I love it a lot!
Mike.Delphi chapter 5 . 12/12/2013
The idea I believe you have should be pretty good. But the only ones with mirrored surfaces to fight her are Harry and Beth and Piper (the knife). What are the others to do?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
hey i was wondering could you please do a story where hogwarts reads the order of the phoenix kidnaps annabeth chase please it would be really good thank you can you at leat start it for next sunday 6th october please thank you
suppertramperadventurer chapter 25 . 9/19/2013
your story is awesome! keep continuing! if you stop, I will have to "end it all"!
Titania.queen.of.fairys chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
Dun dun duuuun, sh*t just got more serious.
Titania.queen.of.fairys chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
I knew it! Luna was Persephones daughter, hot damn i'm good
Love it chapter 25 . 7/13/2013
ElementalMaster16 chapter 25 . 7/11/2013
really cool story! finally over and very happy to have come to the end, nice epilogue.

keep up the writing please (_)
Lightningscar chapter 25 . 7/10/2013
Interesting getting a quick resume of the children of the heroes, though I'm going have to write them all and their biography down and probably need a refresher once you post the next story. But am I right in assuming that most of them will have the same last name as their father? And isn't Abby two or three years older than Kayden?

HAHA! Five daughters? Damn, I hope Harry is happy now. And I hope they have lots of bathrooms or each girl have their own mirror. Otherwise it is going to be a nightmare getting ready for parties and whatnot XD XD

Loved the interactions between the children parents. And with the nice cliffhanger at the end, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar chapter 24 . 7/10/2013
A memorial wall at Camp and fountain for Ministry... fitting. Like the details about the fallen from the Titan War got added too and that the Ministry would add the names of the fallen demigods as well.

Liked the new additions and designs of New Hogwarts with corridors and and stuff being labeled after deceased witches and wizards. But just one little thing: How did Annabeth make a R.O.R? Or did Hogwarts itself do that?

Liked the quick insight as to what the different heroes did shortly after the war, not to mention some of anti-heroes disappearing by going underground.

Heh, Nico's children can blame their rotten luck on their birthday. But I like their names very much and their meanings.

Nice design of the clothes they wore at the wedding, though I lost track of whom were wearing what. XD Never really pay attention to that kind of stuff in real life as well. XD. Just curious though: Why Apollo to lead her up the aisle? Because of their little "club"?

Enyo is up to her tricks again, eh? Gives a very foreboding feelings, especially with her small insinuations to the kids. At least Nico kept his cool somewhat... don't think two gods having a fight among mortals would go over well.

On to next chapter's review, though it probably will be shorter than this one.


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