|Reviews for Bold as the moon - Selfish obsession|
| cellaria chapter 3 . 3/21/2014
I was just thinking of this fic bc my internet was all fucked up for a while so I haven't been on too much but I re read it & still love it lol you need to update! if you ever wana try that msging thing again I got a new comp! :D
| Iyasha chapter 4 . 3/17/2014
Well thats a lot of tension you got there.
One really needs patience to read it trough.
But nevertheless I'm amazed by that writing style of yours! I only read up until chapter 4 so not much action has happened yet. I guess this is all about the feelings and relationship stuff, but they way you describe them makes it interesting to read.
Thanks for writing such a nice thing :)
Sanji is such a scaredy cat!
| SPN1985 chapter 5 . 12/27/2013
Please update! : ] ] ]
| xhelloxbeautifullx chapter 5 . 11/23/2013
i love this ! please update soon :D
| Synkronize chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
Cellariu is right.
Juste write what you want. If they hate reading, its means that they don't apreciate your hard work. I very love your writing and how you control everything. Its rare I follow fanfics like yours
| cellaria chapter 5 . 10/23/2013
noo don't listen to them lol your chapters are not too long.. i love that part! & why stop there? i hope you have the continuation of that last scene in the beginning of the next part! i don't want smut every other chapter bc it can be repetitive but if there's a bit of variety a good amount is nice. they just seem so passionate in this fic with both their love & their lust that i think it would beautiful & super hot! especially since it's the first time they get together & before they go into this fight.. it's making a lot of progress for them so i think it's one that should be there :)
i don't really think you needed to add this little twist about the future.. i loved you just focusing on their daily lives & relationship developing.. but i don't mind some action. i haven't read one like that before it sounds interesting.. er as long as they make things right & don't end up dying lol really this is def one of my fav zosan fics ever so far!
| cellaria chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
love love! maybe not the first time but i now really want them to have sex with that dial on lol
| cellaria chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
your writing is really lovely! so far it's easily in the top 3 fics of them i've read. it's a little bit angsty but at the same time you can already tell they're basically in love with each other & just can't admit it yet. very nicely paced too! i mean i don't like it to drag on forever before they get together but i love that you got a real sense of longing right from the beginning! so that whenever they do have crazy passionate ship-shattering sex-i mean erm acknowledge their feelings lol it's like you've been waiting & it just feels right :D
| cellaria chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
lol you have no idea how much i love this super long chapter! they're very in character & still very sweet & adorable lol. this is so perfect so far!
| maggiepiece chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
great plot development in this chapter! I want more!
| Synkronize chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
*reach the end of chap 5*
O_O NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! I wanted to read more ! D: *was reading it like a mad woman... intensely* ( XDDD lol )
I very love the story and the ideas you choose. Everything, I wuv it ! *is ish a fan wuf yoouuuu*
I want some milk and cookies and huggles please -.- !
| Siriana2526 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Awesome story! Just discovered it today and I'm in love. As for the lenght of the chapters, I can't understand how a story you like can be too long. If they don't want to read long chapters, they don't appreciate it enough. They should stop complaining and spoil our fun. Grrr. Sorry, it's just that I thought this last chapter was so short and to hear that it was because of some selfish readers, that really pissed me off. Anyway, I suggest you do it the way it feels right, without holding back. ;) I story is going to rule no matter what. Keep the good work!
| BlackRoseVixen05 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
USAGI-SWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN! *flying tackle* OHEMGEE, THIS UPDATE IS AWESOME! Sorry for the all caps but DAMN! I love older Sanji! So sexy and sorrowful! Oddly sinister, too... What the hell is he planning now?! . You simply MUST update again soon! You're killing me, here! ;3; Some lemony goodness in the next chapter would be greatly appreciated, too . Hehehehehe... WUV YOU! LATER!
| Aerle chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
I don't really understand how a chapter can be too long... Personally, I don't mind how long the chapters are, but you shouldn't hold back. Especially when you cut it off where you did now. Seriously, I prefer a chapter of 10K if it means we get smut :P
| Dell guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2013
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one!