|Reviews for More Than Nothing|
| team natsu and wendy 4 life chapter 6 . 2/15/2014
UPDATE UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
I REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEALLY LIKE IT
especially the characters!
and i already mentioned this but i LUV OC fanfics (and i have a fettish for this kinda OC right now)
so please update as soon as you can cause i NEED to0 know what happens next.
Plz update !
| team natsu and wendy 4 life chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
i m only on the first chapter but it is SOOOO GOOD
not only do i LUV OC fanfics but recently i have been kinda obsessing over blind OC's, dont know,
its prob pretty rude to blind ppl but i dont know just suddenly had this urge, ya know?
but it was a great start, i hope you continue it.
| CeciliaWinnifer chapter 6 . 11/1/2013
i really really really really really really want to read the next chapter!
| Darkx1xAngel chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
I started laughing so hard my chest hurt
| LilMissJaylene chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
awsome im realy luving this alot, so plz dont keep me waiting long for the update ,
| x L u n a F o r e v e r x chapter 6 . 3/18/2013
Just want to say they I loved it
Please update soon 'cause I'll be waiting :3
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/18/2013
The great Hitsugaya getting tripped by a girl?
And he just had to play truth or dare and get drunk
This is officially the most hilarious and funniest chapter of the history of the fanfictions
When I was reading this, I was rolling on the floor laughing like crazy trying to keep back tears while my mom just watched me awkwardly
I will say it one more time: This was totally hilarious!
I enjoyed it a LOT. It was awesome and I hope other people think the same
| Monkey D. Lyna chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
xD soooo cute! hahaha i love this already! i cant wait til the next chapter! dont take long please
| BlackUndertaker chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
*Spots unconscious Yumichicka and runns over to him* Oh Chicka-chan! What happened to your face!? *pulls giant raw steak out of no where and dropps it flat on his face* This should help! Well... I think. Either it will help or suffocate you... *looks over shoulder* Hey! Ikakku! What happened to Yumichicka? *Ikakku gives me wtf look* Ikakku: He called Kenny ugly, but why are you trying to kill him? *waves arms around* No, no! It supposed to help! Ikakku: why dont you just use kido? *sweat drops* because I'd end up blowing his head off...
*bows* yes that's what happened if I were there. Anyways thanks for updating! Though next time could you please leave chicka-chans face alone? Other than that great chapter! Thanks for updating, BlackUndertaker
| Life is no Fairytale chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
So far, not making a distinction in the change of POV hasn't been confusing, to me atleast, but it might get that way in the future, so it's good that your doing it now. :D okay, onto the actual review.
Umm...you have some fragments here and there, 'Great idea. I smirked.' is an example. I have to say, i THINK toshiro would care that one of his squad members is hopitalized (for lack of a better word. XD) even if he hasn't met them yet. He just seems like that kind of person to me. The entire offfice filled with ice? I seeing how much control Toshiro has over his powers...i'd say there's no way he'd do that on accident.
Kenpachi seems a bit out of character...but then again this is kinda sorta an AU...so maybe for this fic he's not. XD Idk. :P
Wow...long review...I normally don't do that. XD Hope it wasn't over kill!
| BlackUndertaker chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
No kids for Kenny! I completely burst out laughing and my cat started staring at me like I was crazy. But! Oh well. Thanks for updating again! -BlackUndertaker
| Life is no Fairytale chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
my only suggestion is that you make a clear distinction when switching POV that could get really confusing otherwise.
Still not sure what to think...but it seems to be going good! :D
| BlackUndertaker chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Oh oh *waves arm around in air* I think I know! Yuki really is blind and her zanpakto gives her the gift of sight! And/Or it suffocates people with large amounts of sport pressure! I might be wrong buuuuutttt Hana's gonna get it! she just slapped kenny-chan in the face! Thanks for updating, BlackUndertaker
| BlackUndertaker chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Nice start! Hana seems just like she was portraded by her sister. I'm guessing Hana will be Kenny? I like that, hmm well I shall follow so I hope u update soon! Thank you, BlackUndertaker
| Life is no Fairytale chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
mmmm...Not sure if i like this or not. :P I need to read more before I can decide. It seems interesting though, so can't wait to read more.