Aw I like the story so far! I wish you had continued but life goes on... (:

Wonderful! :)

Marie's reputation and power seems too overblown. This was last updated in 2013, so I guess the character got a bit too tedious. It's a waste since the plot was decent.

Huh. The character named Marie was too built up and still comes off as a mediocre manipulator. Is she really much more powerful magically than the MC? This feels like a character who by logic should already be dead if only the author's plot armor was not in play.

Intreasting is tom reali as insane as they belive or is it just to mislead everyone

Can't wait for more, this is great

I love this!

Voila une histoire qui s'annonçait attrayante. A quoi est dû cet arrêt?

I hope you continue this at some point, it's very interesting.

Seems very interesting) Waiting for next chappies)

This fic is absolutely amazing, and I'm so in love with the prose and the characterization/character development. On your profile you said that after finishing Dream and Darkness Collide, you were likely going to chose between this and Ashes - while I really enjoy ashes, I *love* this. It has such a polished feel to it and I'm salivating for more story. Anyway, that's my vote! Please continue writing forever and ever, I find myself loving anything you write.

Ooooh this is an awesome story that is well written and paced. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style. Thank you for writing. Have a nice day :D

Your plot for this story is just as original as in your other works. I really want to see where this is going. Keep up the great work! :)

This is great! I would love to see more of this, but if there isn't anything else, I understand. Still...

Awesome.