Reviews for The Courting of Bryn
inbid chapter 28 . 9/15/2013
I have the same problem with my hair as Maeve but I have a magical solution - hair straightener xD xD xD
Nice chapter girls :)
inbid chapter 26 . 8/30/2013
Awwww :)
It's sweet :) I like it a lot, especially the last part :)
Tell me, described dances are real or your own idea?
inbid chapter 25 . 8/23/2013
Likes this chapter xD
They all are so "Nomad's crew" we know and love :D
It's cool idea to dress up Maeve and Bryn in dresses from queen, by the way :)
I can't wait to read about M/S dance xD
inbid chapter 24 . 8/19/2013
I have just found a little while to read the new chapters and I just want to say that I do love them as much as the whole rest. And as always I had a lot fun reading them :)
Great job, girls :)
Keep writting :)
inbid chapter 20 . 7/18/2013
Quite romantic one, especially the beginning :) and funny as usual :)
Likes it a lot like that rest of the story :)
inbid chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
I like the sotry even more with every chapter :)
Mysterius island, tower, adventures xD I like it :)
The scene with Sinbad and Ikram, simply epic xD
Keep writing writing :)
inbid chapter 17 . 6/27/2013
""
"And I reluctantly agreed. So that is what has been going on behind closed doors. I even had to write a love-letter to myself because Sinbad was too lazy to do it himself," Maeve finished.
"Hey, I helped!" Sinbad said.
""
This part is simply epic!
Keep writing, girls! I love this fanfic!
inbid chapter 16 . 6/20/2013
OMG! xD I'm having so much fun with them xD
Post more! Post more!
inbid chapter 15 . 6/14/2013
Awwwww...
Awwwww...
Awwwww...
And awwww...
I'm in love with this story and all their games. It's like a good romantic comedy :D
I can't wait for more!
TetiSherii chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how mean yet lovely & cute !
love this way too much :D :D first seeing B/D almost as a couple now :) :) it's so cute :) well, there is still a little tension but they are almost there,, lovely to see that development and its progress along with chapters ;)
also Doubar being that patient with her while teaching is so nice, like this side of him :) and i think Bryn has her already ideas about teachers after Maeve fiery mood ;D ;D the poor one :P
as for their thoughts about S/M ... well that's so .. what ? caring, lovely, hmmmm... sweet from them,
but also the idea that it comes -kinda- fire back still little mean :D but i love this spirit :P
and yup i agree with Doubar, they team up greatly giving great ideas/plans ;) ;) and i love their first plan ;D ;D
oh, i'm waiting to see its results impatiently ... yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy :)
TetiSherii chapter 9 . 5/4/2013
haaaaaaaaa... another sweet chapter, but i can see Bryn self confidence is down! something i'm not familiar with about her, as usually she is this strong sweet girl... but still strong,,,, in some moments i discover she is even stronger than Maeve in some situations!
but in love situations ... well may be it's right, that it'd be different,,, shyness and low self confidence attack some people :) :)
now question: why Doubar sounds little amused ? i know why irritated but not why amused,
and the SECOND KISS :D :D :D
it's shame M/S hadn't their second one even :( but i'm happy for D/B :) :)
and that reminds me ... the first was MJ creation and the second is yours :D how nice creative & cooperative work,,, you're wonderful team together :)
TetiSherii chapter 8 . 5/3/2013
wow,, the part of Sinbad for me is priceless,,, he made up for the previous chapter :D :D good boy ;) *giggles*
so no need to say again that i love this scene,, Maeve vs Bryn ... well sure it's matter of height *giggles again* i always imagine it when they are together and have discussion teasing... of course Maeve wins :) and it also remind me how i feel Maeve will always treat her as younger sister though some authors assume Bryn is older -which is regarding to actress is true- but Maeve taller give the feeling being older,,,,
how Doubar defend her... very expected from the gentleman ,,, not only through his romantic life, but his original character... a real gentleman as always,,
and Mourad ... you use this name ? it's one of my favorites,,, how did you get it and did you choose it ? :)

for me i consider this chap one of the nicest ones, coz i love this gesture of Doubar so much, besides Sinbad reaction and how finally he start being .. nice and understanding!
good work,,
TetiSherii chapter 7 . 5/3/2013
lovely idea,,, i wouldn't think about it myself :) :) and her having nightmares is so convincing ... her past wasn't the perfect one with some dark hints coming from her family and her blood still carry the dark droplets from her father, along with the fact of amnesia ... she should have them,
but to think the first thing of Doubar, that's big progress, ... now we can see real progress in her emotions even if still not revealed yet :D
i love how you mention Sinbad would pay Doubar what the latter did to him in the past :D SO FUNNY ... can't imagine Sinbad teasing his brother in this subject,,
nice chapter dear,, well done :)
TetiSherii chapter 6 . 4/28/2013
this one of the weakest situation that Sinbad had been in, because it shows how is he like ignorant in issues concerning proper caring about ladies even he never appears to be, and it reflects his arrogance, as it's the real cause why he is like that,
it's very rare that it was showed, may be never obviously, he is always the guy who every girl crush on and run to, so he never cares on how he can draw their interests or more like what are their interests,
i felt annoyed of him, partly,, my other feeling was pity! his arrogance and stubbornness blind him to see beyond his brother words as you can till they didn't affect him till the end of chapter! his mind never changed nor his look, :( so i'm not sure exactly if i should laugh or be sad about him,,

from other side, Doubar as always was ... VERY NICE and true gentleman,,, and in this chapter he totally took the whole scene from under Sinbad's feet,,, i totally love him here and if i should pick i'll prefer Doubar,
also he shows here something wasn't so obvious before due to his usual rush,,, being Wise!
i can't keep myself from loving him here from many sides and angles,

best quote that attracts my attention totally is his: "you're the type of guy who likes to kiss a hundred girls a single time. I'm the kind of guy that likes to kiss a single girl a hundred times."
how true is it? i can't tell,,,, and it's definitely very wise from you dear MJ to use and form it in that way :) bows at that :)
very very nice chapter, that left me with admiration to first mate and pity to poor captain,
inbid chapter 8 . 4/26/2013
Doubar is so courteous! He is even more then so so... if you know what I mean! :D
Loves it! :D And loves Doubar! He such a sweet teddy bear! :D
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