Reviews for Formal Wear
konochan-kaioh chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
awww its so kawaii! thanks for writing! i love my cute secchan jejejeje
Fulgrim chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Excellent 'fic - the relationship between Setsuna and Negi all-too-often gets overlooked, so it's wonderful to find someone addressing it. :)
DKscribe88 chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
I'm not usually the type of person to say this but, That was sooo cute! You just can't beat the awkward, shy Setsuna you have so brilliantly cast in this story. And the always diplomatic and supportive Negi was well done also. Can't wait to read more, DK
For Spite chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Huh. Given that I know you read Shadow Crystal Mage I was expecting more comedy out of this topic. Instead I got a slice-of-life piece. Which is probably for the best, since that makes it more of it's own work.

You captured the emotions of involved well, with the embarrassment and fumbling awkwardness, though it feels a bit like it doesn't quite go anywhere. Possibly that's because she'd already picked the suit out before it started so it's more of a reaction shot than anything? I'm not sure exactly how to fix that issue. You're definitely still strong on character work, though.