Reviews for familiar taste of poison
LtheWolf chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
Ahhh i thought thus was Bellamione and that Sora was Bellatrix in disguise for some reason, now my mind is completely confused... And a slave to a deatheater? Her aunt, why?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Just to let you know, there is a HUGE difference between "I haven't touched her little brother" (which is what you wrote) and "I haven't touched her, little brother" (which is what you should have written).
Destiny2013 chapter 6 . 10/19/2013
I've feel bad for Sora and how did Bellatrix escape Azkaban or was she even in the the dreaded prison?
ScOut4It chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
/I hear you've been….distracted as of late." I flinched at her cruel and bitter tone. 'Fuck. I didn't think she'd find out about Hermione…'/
Oh poor Hermione. . . ;D

I hope that she gets two (or more female) owners and that Sora doesn't completely lose her.
/In fact you've done so well ill even let you keep your little pet. For now./
But I do like that Auntie Bella is in the know.

Lucius is disgusting. Can't he be just an asshole and not an incestual rapist too? Ugh, I hope he dies soon and I haven't even had to read a chapter with him in it.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
Wow, she really is a chameleon of many shades. I love how she claimed Hermione for all of her house to see (but not giving them too much of a show).
I hope that she stays a little tender as she has been.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
Ch. 2
Oh, I wrote this before I slept. It's more productive feedback I hope :)


Okay, here's the con-crit:
Because I know the eventual pairing, the beginning of this chapter is confusing. First I thought that Hermione was tucked into her dorm room and suddenly somehow there was killing going on outside of it. The appearance of the brunette woman seemed to be like Bellatrix (covered in blood after killing). Then how she addressed Hermione made me think that it was Bella talking to Cissa or Cissy. I finally realized that it was a memory of Hermione's in a dream of her real mother (I only would come to that conclusion from the story summary) and then it clicked, but the moment was lost.

in the last third of this chapter you switch from first person. Here is a long quote to show you where:
/I smiled back at him nervously and wrung my hands together.

"Well sir I was wondering if we could speak in the privacy of your office. What I need to discuss with you is of the utmost secrecy and I'd prefer to keep it that way." He raised a gray eyebrow at me and then nodded. Saying his goodbyes to nearly headless Nick, he led me down a series of halls until we made it to a large stone gargoyle. Dumbledore raised his head high and clearly spoke.

"Lemon drop!" the gargoyle then jumped out of the way to reveal a spiral stone staircase. Hermione followed Dumbledore up the stairs and through the door that lead to his office. The room was circular in shape and every last inch of wall space was dedicated to portraits of former headmasters. Hermione looked at the portraits in awe as the moved and talked to each other. /

Ch. 3
I like how Sora is keeping Hermione off-balance. She also is subtly coercing her through threat of exposure (as a muggle-born). Nice play, and I see Slytherin is strong with her.
Scout4it chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
They system is having logging in issues...

I like that Dumbledore didn't give anything away too much. I rarely like to read him, so I'm glad that you kept it short and sweet. His wording was really excellent.

Interesting warning by Draco; let's see if she is really such a viper or if Hermione is the exception :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I love how she is in Slytherin. I also love brunettes with blue and/or green eyes. (Brown is fine too though :)

Nice OFCs!

Nice writing too :) No noticed errors in spelling or grammar. Love the content.

Like how you gave them a sky ceiling in the room as I always felt the dungeon would not be enviable (though, they 'could' have windows if it's built into the cliff-face near the water...) without the view.
Kigo Stories chapter 6 . 8/28/2013
please continue this story
Q chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
For a short chapter, I thought this was brilliant! The story is developing really well and it's nice to see the emotional parts of Sora and I like how you had Bella tie into all of this.

Totally rad.


Gothicangel555 chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
Hurry up and continue!
A2463 chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
Love it! Please continue! Really love it!
xAngeloftheNorthx chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Sora Malfoy is Bellatrix isn't she? :)
I hope Hermione will soon know that she's actually Celeste Slytherin.. But wait, is she related to Voldemort? Yes she is isn't she? Voldemort is a Slytherin too!

I hope that once both Hermione's and Sora's identities will be revealed they will still stay together :)

Gothicangel555 chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
fslover chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
I don't think Sora should be Bellatrix in disguise or something like that because if that was the case, then in the 2nd chapter, Draco would'nt have dared to argue with her or threaten her plus you've written that Lucius raped Sora. That coward wouldn't dare to touch Bellatrix. I think Bellatrix, Sora and Hermione should have a three way relationship. I know it will be slight incest between Bella and Sora but that would really be hot. I don't like what you've written about Lucius raping Sora or whatever coz if Lucius would've even thought of doing that, Narcissa should have ripped his balls off (she's shown as a strong woman and really protective mother in the books). Otherwise really good interesting story.
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