Reviews for Maelstrom's New Song
Perseus12 chapter 1 . 3/6
You reap what you sow, Konoha.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 3 . 12/3/2016
pretty cool start!
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
Ch 2

Also update.
ivanganev1992 chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
Ch 3

Cool new subtype of the legendary Meloerta . Maale variation of the ex ninja.
Avalanche-dragoon chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
Nice story please continue
crazyone-oh-one chapter 3 . 4/7/2015
Where are you chapter 3 . 11/22/2014
Okay, first you lied about the update date and what happend? Are you dead or something?

New Fan chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
I relly liked how you came up with the name. It makes me think it really is a tecnique that only bijuu can use and I like the orginality of it. Nice job. I am writing a book so be sure to check it out if you can and think you can make a FemLucario x Naruto fan fiction? if so please contact me at I Only get online about every two weeks. My parents are ''sperated'' I should say. 12 years old by the way.
Katsu The Umbreon chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
Team Uniā€¦ makes me think of unicorns.
READER chapter 3 . 9/17/2014
isnt it a bit early for that last dialogue sentence.
reader chapter 2 . 9/16/2014
I dont like when people do this:
Someone asks naruto for an explaination like in this story and naruto talls them everything(his life).
it just doesnt feel right and it kills some mystery that can be used to drive the thing is he couldve just said something like I was banished and used a technique... ,a persons life is private property ,you dont just go willy nilly telling your whole life just for an explaination.

p.s Im not saying that you did this.
DragonPony022 chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
I wonder what will have next for our group of heroes. I can't wait for her to try to teach Naruto how to dance and he try to teach her how to play. I could so see a roselia joining them and falling for Naruto as well lol.
freeze47458 chapter 3 . 8/6/2014
Way to leave us at a cliff hanger over here. Just keep updating okay I like this story.
Leez chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
Is this a dead fic? Or do you plan on updating it any time soon?
Falcon800 chapter 5 . 3/15/2014
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