Reviews for Three Dances
Different Child chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
leigugrhr. ( guliergh. NOOOO. It's for anyone. T_T_T He and Pema could have a lovely time! I want to have a 'night for the young'. I feel old so often because I work with kids and I'm not a teenager anymore and I didn't do so much of the 'normal' stuff because I just wasn't interested. / Meh. But she'd be in her twenties then. Come on world! Show me something to do! Sorry. I'm rambly today and not making sense. It would've been better split up into individual chapters, but good.
Thimbleberry20 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I really like this. You wrote Jinora very well and I like the idea of her going to school in the city. Each of her friends are also written well and they are each unique, which I like. Tomu especially is a very well-rounded character. The festival too is very creative and interesting I think this is a excellent story. Keep up the good work! :)