|Reviews for Ranma's Disgaea: Hour of Chaos|
| Laharl.Chan00 chapter 6 . 2/22
| Sdarian chapter 6 . 1/29
Here, using Ginzuishou would be okay, even though there is a English translation for it, as it's often used as the actual name of the thing, instead of just a description of it which is what it translates to.
Kotatsu is fine here as there isn't anything which is an English equivalent.
For the rest: Furo - bathtub; Genkan - Entrance; Sento - Bathhouse.
Aside from that though, the reasons and consequences that where given were somewhat confusing. And if Ranma is going to take up the mantel of protecting his world, I'm kind of surprised that his mom didn't offer him the use of her training facilities. After all, spending some time in an Item World, leveling up both his abilities and his gear is something that would absolutely appeal to Ranma, and it would work to make him strong enough to both get the rock as well as defend his world.
I can see some issues with easing him into the idea, but to not even let him know what options are available? Especially after mentioning that eventually she is going to have to pass his world on to someone else... You would think that she would let him have access to what he needs to grow strong - regardless of if he is a Succubus, other demon, or human. After all, a training ground where enemies always get stronger and the possibility of instant/fast healing to keep him going would be an absolute godsend to him, especially after the close call of his last fight.
Anyway, this has been neat so far. Looking forward to more.
| Sdarian chapter 3 . 1/29
As an addition from the last comment, seeing the translations at the end here just makes it even easier to see how you should have written them instead.
Zabuton is simply straight replaced with cushion.
Ryokan, is translated as a "Traditional Japanese Inn" easy enough. Though, depending on who is talking or the viewpoint, you might drop "Japanese" and just leave it at "Traditional Inn".
| Sdarian chapter 2 . 1/29
You would have been better off just using table, instead of "chabudai" as that is a word that means "table" and obviously we already have a word in English for that.
The general rule of things like this, is to only use a word in another language if there is no equivalent in English. For example, we don't have anything like the -san -chan suffixes, so it would be okay to use them, but for most things there is already an English equivalent for them that you would use instead as the story is written in English.
| Rickmer chapter 6 . 1/26
An intriguing beginning :)
Are you planning to continue writing this, or is it abandoned?
| turtles chapter 6 . 10/15/2013
if he stays a demon you would think transmigrating into a male demon would be his first thought
| Blackholelord chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
Well its unique. Now if Nabiki falls for Ranma-chan would be nice (personally for me) to read. Ranma facing off against the Sailor Senshi, that would be a twist. Hard to explain how I would feel about that.
| Aceina chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
im a bit let down you brought hte senshin into this Baal or some other cosmic horror from disgaea would have made a more fiting threat
and help atach it more to the disgaea games
| skywiseskychan chapter 6 . 8/14/2013
This is an intriguing story, and much deeper than I was originally expecting it to be. I"m looking forward to seeing how you have Ranma react, to both the Tendos, especially Nabiki and the sailor senshi.
I actually really hope she just tries to go and talk with them about the silver crystal. It would be a relief to see that aproach tried.
| Anon42 chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
Nice chapter. It puts pressure on Ranma and forces him/her to do some serious thinking, while we get to see that Nyx does care for her offspring, while very much remaining a demon.
I like it. Do keep up the good work!
| cj1of4 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Interesting... I never thought of this angle in getting Ranma to except/like his cursed from.
| shugokage chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
Intriguing story good luck!
| TJG chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
One possibility is whether or not Ranma could potentially drain or convert the chaos magic "pollution" side-effect of the silver crystal use. If so, the perhaps Ranma could perfect the Thief techniques to steal the Silver Crystal and take on the role of Sailor Chaos but rather than a malevolent soul-sucking being, Ranma could could be a benevolent soul-sucking being. Maybe the chaos magic use could be something like the Scarlet Witch of Marvel comics.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
| Dumbledork chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
Cool. Can't wait to see Ranma go agaonst the senshi.