Reviews for Kaleidoscope of Magic
The Harrinator chapter 13 . 3/31
Alright, what the hell is up with the names missing in dialogue sometimes? There's two spaces, proper punctuation, everything, just no goddamn names. I've never even seen that kind of fuckup before, how'd you do that?
Anonymous chapter 38 . 3/29
Dude this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Please update it! I love it!
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 1/28
Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea
Tobi14 chapter 37 . 1/25
Hey kardin sorry I hope this doesn't seem like a flame but you story does not make sense both the department and voldemort torture their members as initiation both use horcrux and black magic in fact considering what they did to harry the only difference is voldemort does not hide his intentions actually given how they were sacrificeing the defenceless people in the city to torned nashiel monster for the greater good both treat non magical people as tools really man is it kind of makes me root for voldemort as he is a self made monster who seems to make a lot of sence with his beliefs regarding power. So what's the death eaters motivation in this because I can't tell. Sorry kardin but I say the flammels and their students are the worst thing in the story for me I'm sorry you clearly put in a lot of effort into their characters in fact have you thought if you ever made another Harry potter story you should use them thier as well but it's a combination of their inaction, hipocraspy they had years to prepare for training and researching for the sharingan many would restore the wand wizard world yet nothing no mass recruitments no strategy's for example the fey and iron they have transfiguration to turn thing to iron they can't make runes that turn to iron when they sence fey or a code that turn all the streets in the wizarding world into iron or the vampire with harry Dresden stores sunlight these are both century old veterans and geniuses they should have something for vampires. The way the flammles control the department directly if not through their students who share their ideals but being capable of dismissing the heads of the department if they do something they don't like it gives the impression of control freaks that is a good plot point. So in short can I make a suggestion instead of the no doubt beautiful death scene you are writing for their fight to their deaths use nicodemus Barbara's curse that pretty much means when your dead on the female flammle in an ambush with most of the blackend order of denarians and voldemort with him have them use voldemort talent as a mind mage to steal all their knowledge of the department every agent identity they know and their families every safe house building the department know and built and their knowledge of the philosopher's stone and since they are related to the original sharigan user voldemort might get the sharigan from their blood and all their knowledge of the bloodline and so the worst weakness of the department the way the flammles control it no succesor apparently they apparently expected to rule the department that is above the law for ever and dismiss the heads if someone went against their view of the magical world the way the potters worship them is probably the way the department all does means they won't know what to if they die get Grindelwald to lead them? This ties in to Harry's motivation from chapter 1 to make sure no one suffers like he did so he can reforge the department of mystery's into something that doesn't have to sink to the depts of depravity to survive. No insult intended but after the first few chapters intonation dog either a mad dog or lapdog he will do what ever the flammles, archive, Hermione,teacher's,sister,white council,evolves,rashid wants I think it would the weight of the world on his shoulders turn him into responsible man who acknowleging the burden of it understands why they did the things they did but following his own path and what way the world should be not Neville who puts his parents always first but someone who nobility made him fight a basilisk for someone he bearly know. Who knows the nessity of the greater good yet suffered for it and will practice it only In the direst circumstances. I hope you consider Kardin yours respectfully tobi14
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13
uhhhh... no thanks
emi chapter 38 . 1/9
didnt harry make an oath that dumbledore would die at his hands hands? where is the backlash from that? or did I imagine that?
W4rl0ck180699 chapter 38 . 1/8
Awesome story man...can't wait for the end but don't this story to end... please upload the next chapter asap please...
Xadro chapter 1 . 1/3
Well obviously the Wizard World doesn't deserve to be saved, i say Harry should be a worse threat to it than Voldemort.
Tobi14 chapter 38 . 12/11/2016
The plot thickens
Tobi14 chapter 32 . 12/11/2016
So a lot of cannon fodder was lost, but whoever it was that got to Harry wouldn't consider that for a second Voldemort would sacrifice all of them in a second after all he won this fight he got rid of the aura of invincibility of the divine weapons he may have permanently wounded harry who knows have many will jump in now that the myth of sharingan was shattered
Tobi14 chapter 30 . 12/11/2016
Alistair seems to a lot more comment then than pretty much all other subordinates working for the factions it must being hunted by the wizard world's for si long
Tobi14 chapter 28 . 12/11/2016
Really good fight but how what's the department's plan to defeat riddle let harry dual him. Drown him in corpses as his necromancy prevents that
Tobi14 chapter 24 . 12/11/2016
You know the second he uses resurrection everyone who wants their loved ones back alive is gonna want his eyes
Tobi14 chapter 21 . 12/11/2016
It's getting more Dresden like don't forget Britain
Tobi14 chapter 19 . 12/11/2016
Really it says a lot that so many people believe in the greater good won't sacrifice themselves the the department leaders really don't like to risk their lives
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