Reviews for In Plain Sight
Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
Oh poor Edward.
I do feel for him, but his mum has told him, and he knew what he was getting into.
Bella hasn't much of a life either.

So looking forward to more.
Sunsetwing chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
Poor poor Edward :(
chantiemaya chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Really enjoyed these two chapters, interesting set up. Looking forward to more!
mimimgr chapter 2 . 4/12/2013
:( he's hurt and acting his age... so Bella is younger than everyone thinks... interesting... wondering now how much of an age difference between Bella and James
Mistydeb chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Oh dear I get the feeling that James is up to something and will probably do/ say it at the party. Thks for the update, Debbie
Evelyne-raconte chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
I'm so glad to know that there is a sequel to this OS. Thank you for sharing.
HeartOfDarkess chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
oh dear...well i hope E can get B away from that horrible man asap. great update hun xx
Edward's spouse chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
interesting. later.
Tinsley Warren chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Maybe Bella shouldn't act like the lovesick giggly wife in front of Edward even if its in front of people. That hurts.

So she's clearly torn. But James seems like a real asshole, especially for getting an underaged girls pregnaunt!
tigger5600 chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Well Esmw warned him...I think this is going to be a hard lesson for him to learn :(
rubell chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
i really hate that poor edward is just stuck...
mommymac0508 chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Poor Edward but bella needs to wise up and leave before its too late update soon
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Ohh this story makes me tense, can't wait till the party!
Pyejammies chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Edward and Bella are swimming in dangerous waters.
Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
So they aren't that far apart in age. Hmm
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