Thank You,this is definitely going on my Favorites list. Glad you got over the trolls and shit reviews. Way too many great stories get abandoned cause the Author listened to Stupid ass people who weren't writing their story. Fuck That, write for You.

I really enjoyed this story.

Thank you for finishing this...till next time!

So, Hermione is treated like shit and left with nothing. Weird story.

Ok first, sad day when this writer said enough. Its one thing to get a good amount of chapters in, give reason why you no longer like it, give an idea on what you think could be changed but thats just given an idea for possible furture story. A whole other thing to do it to a point it makes em stop. Read the summary and if you get invested in reading give a reason IF you want but wish the writer luck. Dont be a dick, if you dont like the summary or only a few chapters in, just find a new one. This writer is one of the great and i say that n this out of respect and able to say, some summaries i just didnt gel with and didnt bother with. Now tho, someone who brought this amazing tale, had stopped writting a bit ago truely sad.

WIND SHEAR

It is a good Harry/Bellatrix on this site.

Harry is cast back in time, and butterflies make it so House Black doesn't follow Voldemort.

Bella is fascinated by Harry and chases him, they are not together at the end.
But Lily is with Sirius Black, and Arcturus allows it.
Plus though she hasn't caught him yet, it is hinted Bellatrix will get Harry.

The sudden change in Lily Evans from thinking and feeling that James Potter was an immature bully to being the Love Of Her Life is not explained or even hinted at in canon.

ROUNDABOUT DESTINY explained it while sending Hermione back in time to be reborn as James twin sister.

LILY EVANS FIGHTS FIRST also gives an explanation.

There is a story, I forget the title and wrier, where Lily and James are victims of Dumbledore's manipulation.
He potions her, while in Hogwarts, they marry right after, a child is immediately conceived.
Of course she stayed with the father. Then Tom kills her.

There are quite a few guesses...

Have you read either INFERNO?

One is a classic, the other a science fiction book only a few decades old.

I think it is written by Jerry Pournelle or Larry Niven, maybe both.

And my reading recommendation is THE BRITISH REFORMATION.

Forgiving Jason is one thing, but asking Lily to forgive James after he physically and mentally raped her you're crazy.

wTF? 15 chapitre pour ça ? Ce pardon ridicule ? Je m'attendais à mieux mais après tout, c'est ta fic. Dsl , je zappe le favori, trop de déception, une adrénaline qui retombe comme un soufflet

Pourquoi fais-tu comme les autres auteurs avec du vu et réchauffé ? Il ne punir jamais James, il parle alors qu'on s'en fiche, sa mère a souffert, il devrait écraser ces minables au lieu de vouloir travailler avec son connard d'ex frère qui ne se serait jamais embarrassé de lui. Il est le cavalier il n'est pas là pour être indulgent il prend et punis, merde alors où est le Harry qui leur en met plein la gueule ? Ce n'est PLUS sa famille alors arrête de les épargner, on lis pour les voir souffrir pas pour que ça se transforme en une fic dégoulinante sur le pardon et liens familiaux primordiaux, il y a des choses qu'on ne pardonne pas, même à un frère ou un père et si James abandonne son pseudo héro que Harry ne fasse pas sa tafiole en disant : pas sa faute, il était jeune ! Il savait parfaitement ce qu'il faisait, pas d'excuse de merde, ni Lily ni Harry ne doivent pardonner.

Sorry you have chosen to give up writing, I’ve enjoyed your stories over the years. I’ve read some of the bad reviews all I can say is those that can do, and those that can’t complain. You are worth more than all the complainers combined. Take care.

Congratulation...I couldn't even reading the first chapter...OMG..another WBWL story...this one even more outlandish in the way that ooh they only need one of the twins...so of course Harry is sent away...away to the same place TMR spent his childhood.

are you on a other site

Scorpio is a cool middle name, but going by astronomical names, I think Polaris (The pole star, the evil star) would be less edge-lord sounding, but still work with the theme :P