This was so beautifully written. Well done. Every story of yours that I’ve read has been so poignant, starting off deceivingly simple and diving headlong into a mysterious world of secrets while retaining all of the delicate and vivid details that I enjoyed in the first few chapters. I really loved it. I read most of this in one day, totally gobbled this shit up and although the sun has set, I have no regrets at all. This was an amazing ride. I hope you got more of this because I’m gonna need to read your other stories or I’m gonna have withdrawals pretty soon.

I wish we could have an outtake of Charlie finding out that Edward robbed him lmfao. I’ll have to settle for imagining it, after all, had he not targeted Bella and fallen in love with her, she’d probably be sleeping with the fishes.

The way you planned out this story is just so elaborate, yet not over engineered, you know? I love it. The secrecy of Edward’s life, and the corruption of Charlie’s, and by extension his daughters’? It’s really well done, only improved upon by your illustrative and evocative storytelling skills.

You really truly have been putting us on an IV drip, all the little ominous clues you left in previous chapters…..

Damn this was so sad. I know it was summarized in the description but it was sadder than I anticipated. Idyllic days turned into betrayal, very sad and disappointed for Bella, but also pity for Edward. I hope he has good reason for what he does. I’ve read your other stories before and left comments under guest name “25” or maybe “26” don’t remember, but I enjoy reading your writing so much, I couldn’t help but soak it all up, neglecting to leave a comment until now. Your writing is fascinating, and I can almost remember being 19 and having a crush on a few douchebags myself lol. As I said before, your stories got me rolling around in my bed kicking my legs in the air!

Absolutely loved reading this story :) hope you’re doing well and still writing

J'adore cette histoire et l'évolution de la relation entre Bella et Edward toit au long des chapitres ainsi que leur évolution personnelle.
Merci pour cette histoire!

absolutely loved it. I might never have forgiven Edward if I were her but I'm glad they could be happy in the end . very unique premise and you got me feeling all the feels

Awww, this was so good.
Edge of my proverbial seat good!
Thanks for sharing!

What a great story. Enjoyed every single minute of reading this one. Thank you so much for sharing! x

I'm sorry. I just can't take it any longer. You wouldn't say "Tanya and Tyler drop I home," so don't say "Tanya and Tyler drop Edward and I home." Use ME. ("Tanya and Tyler drop Edward and ME home.") You've made this error throughout the story. The substitution test always works!

She sneaks a PEEK at him, not a PEAK. A PEEK is a quick, secretive glance. A PEAK is the highest part of something, like a mountain peak.

This was brilliant. Loved it

Somehow missed this back when it was published-but very glad to have found it now :)

Wonderfull! Well done!

I loved this! It was nothing like I expected in such a great way! Loved these two so much!