What a great story. Enjoyed every single minute of reading this one. Thank you so much for sharing! x

I'm sorry. I just can't take it any longer. You wouldn't say "Tanya and Tyler drop I home," so don't say "Tanya and Tyler drop Edward and I home." Use ME. ("Tanya and Tyler drop Edward and ME home.") You've made this error throughout the story. The substitution test always works!

She sneaks a PEEK at him, not a PEAK. A PEEK is a quick, secretive glance. A PEAK is the highest part of something, like a mountain peak.

This was brilliant. Loved it

Somehow missed this back when it was published-but very glad to have found it now :)

Wonderfull! Well done!

I loved this! It was nothing like I expected in such a great way! Loved these two so much!

This was a really beautiful story! Sad it’s over!

Wow! I don't know how I missed this story but I am glad I found it. I wanted to hate Edward and even Bella a little, but I loved the redemption! You really have a gift for writing feelings, any story that can make me feel it is a winner in my book!

Thank you for sharing!

Ahh and we've come full circle and what a ride. I've so enjoyed this little fic! You make it so easy to get lost in them all.
-Gigi xo

Hey, it’s me again. I just finished reading this one via ePub. It’s been on my TBR list for a while now, but I never got around to it. I’ll be honest, it took me a little bit to get into it, I was kinda nervous, idk why? I’ve read a lot of your stories and know what you write but for some reason this one had me anxious. It took me a while to actually read the whole thing, between baby sitting, reading my WIPs as they came in, & just life, but I got it finished. Once I hit my groove, I enjoyed it. You’re talented with words, my dear. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Wow. This story was beautiful.
Thanks for tour time
LQUEZ

Wow, what a ride. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
-stz

She better give her dad his fucking money back! And that dumb little bitch better tell him about Edward and show Charlie his picture!

Im so embarrassed for bella. He stole from her dad, she knows he planned it all out and used her to do it and shes seriously sitting there asking "did he love me? Does he love me now?" You have written Bella so pathetically I can barely stand this shit.