Reviews for Stolen
KristineM chapter 8 . 4/22/2013
They had such a last great day together! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
kng5 chapter 8 . 4/22/2013
Love! I need more!
IluvOTH4ever chapter 7 . 4/22/2013
It's really interesting trying to figure out this story with each chapter, trying to figure out what's going on in Edward's mind as he's clearly trying to keep an emotional distance from Bella but wants to be close to her at the same time.

Obviously, the prologue set up the drama to come, which is great because you've given build-up to it. Have we nearly reached the prologue stage yet? I can't wait! Please write another chapter asap :)
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 7 . 4/22/2013
Are Edward and his family grifters? He says they move around often and hesitant to offer any details about his life. Poor Bella is headed for a heartbreak. Great story!
RoryCullen chapter 7 . 4/21/2013
It brought tears to my eyes when he called the night short to take her home early and I felt for her when she fled from him, from his car before he could kiss her goodbye. I probably would have done the same, my flight instinct triggered. I might have asked him what happened, or if something were wrong back at his place, but I think if I were her age I would have done the same as Bella and left as soon as I could trying to save face.

I really love that he came to see Bella in the wee-hours, he sounded so desperate to see her, like he felt bad for taking her home early and he couldnt wait to tell her that because he obviously cares.

I get the feeling - especially knowing what we know - he meant what he was saying when he said he would like to just leave, to run away with her. He doesn't want to do whatever he is involved in, and he doesn't want to hurt her, or himself, leaving her the way he eventually will.

I question what Charlie might be involved in, who Edward got a phone call from, what is really behind the closed door in his apartment - if it really belongs to his brother, and lastly if Charlie and whatever Edward and perhaps his brother is involved in is connected?
Pyejammies chapter 7 . 4/21/2013
Holiday romances are hard.
Not a second to waste chapter 7 . 4/21/2013
This is sooo good. Cant wait to see how this turns out!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Big sister gives good advice. Unfortunately the regret Bella is going to have over her first time are not anything you'd ever expect. Suspicion that someone is pressuring Edward to get closer to Bella than he intended. His reasoning behind her being hurt is totally different from what she's expecting. Does it have anything to do with his brother? Both brothers? Guessing one brother is Emmett and his girlfriend is Rosalie. Did Edward really lose his mother to an accident five years ago? Naturally suspicious of everything being said.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
Is Tanya wanting to spend more time with her sister or does she suspect something is a little off about Edward? Has maybe Tyler said something she wasn't supposed to hear? Charlie doesn't want his little girls to grow up. Wishful thinking on his part. Edward's playing his game very well. But does he know Bella and Tanya's father is a police officer?
FFpassion chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
So so good, love Stolen so much!
I feel for them both, it must be so hard knowing your time together is coming to a close.
Something fishy is going on and I can't help but wonder what Charlie is up to and if Edward is involved in some way.
Can't wait to read more.
Thank you for the update.
nia77 chapter 7 . 4/18/2013
noooooooooooooo that song :'(

man is getting really hard no to believe he has something to do with the steeling thing...
ChocolateLover82 chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Oy, every move he makes makes me so angsty. I read his scenes with shifty eyes, lol. Just waiting for the boy to screw up, as we know he will. However, I can't say I don't see something more in his actions. Regret? His situation is s obviously not all black and white.

It won't make it hurt any less, though. :-(

To be honest, at the moment I'm more interested in seeing what happens next. How will this change Bella. If we check the summary, I sure as fuck wouldn't be able to forgive him, lol. But the heart is a tricky, tricky thing and I'm not the one falling for Edward.

Anyway, thanks for sharing.

Love, CL82
LostIntimidation chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Man, vacation romances are things of pure heartache. It always feels more intense and romantic when you meet someone away from home, rules, friends. I've had my share and they are bittersweet indeed!
LostIntimidation chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
Ah! How did I miss these lovely updates? This chapter was really enjoyable. Mmm..a nice boat, the stars, Edward...seems perfect. Can't wait to connect the prologue to where we are in the story now!
lucyv chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Enjoying it immensely
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